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- d_rek0
Formally, it's nice. A-n is a bit of a tough read, but since my form memory tells me that should be a lowercase 'n' that's what I read it as.
Is there a reason you chose to not bevel or round all of the corners? Looks inconsistent having the chamfered/beveled edges of the 'a' transition to the rounded corners of the 'n'.
The type below it is just ... bad. You should try different explorations for this type, different lock ups with the 'AN', try sentence case, etc. And for the love of god please don't letterspace it so far apart. Lets just not letterspace it period.
Try that type below:
Australian Natural
Because Nature is Made of WoodFlush left on two lines with the type block set to the right of the mark, scale until the x-height and baseline hit the top and bottom of the AN.
Outside of that your application is limited so it's really hard to tell if it will be succesful in context.
- detritus0
Not sure of the underlyng logic - are those top forms related to your client's product or some cut they use, or something? There doesn't necessarily need to be a rationale, of course, it just feels like you are tryig to say something by using sharp and rounded forms like that - i'm just not sure what. is there a logic behind the fact the middle line in the A hits the outside at the pinnacle whereas elsewhere it doesn't... or was that simply a decision based on the overal height between the two forms?
Alignment of your tagline against logo's full type is.. well, way off.
Reduced forms, in circles, feel more like a logo for an electronics outfit.
Rounded square form crops to an entirely different logo?
Whilst every nature/wood outfit doesn't need to be set in Red/Blue, it does feel like a more muted or naturified choice is demanded by the tagline.
I like where the simplest form, at top, is going - but it feels like it's a sketch rather than a fully-fleshed entity.
- sine0
what is a nature shop? what do they sell?
- fadein110
Colour treatment and type do not communicate what its about. feels too techie or sci-fi - like a logo you'd get for an evil corporation in a sci-fi film.
Perhaps differentiate the weight of the type between the name and tagline - name could be heavier?
- BillGates0
to sine: they sell wooden anal toys, but now they was to enlarge their fanbase by expanding their client's base.
- "Because splinters are made of wood" niceZOOP
- What a dickish response to an honest question.monospaced
- LOL @ honest question, mono... you are too easyZOOP
- if you look 3 posts up all will become clear :/ZOOP
- ummmm.... mono was talking to Bill .....
lolpango - oh, was a good lol all the same :PZOOP
- http://video.edenfan…ohhhhhsnap
- by expanding their client's base LOL!ohhhhhsnap
- I caught that too hah!ZOOP
- fate0
"Because Nature is Made of Wood" is a ridiculous tagline.
But I can't tell if this entire thread is just you trolling.
- BillGates0
as usual the trolls come out in force,
just asked for a simple crit,- Nobody's trolling you.monospaced
- You asked what ppl thought. Theyre telling you.CygnusZero4
- :/ ya everyone's actually trying to pointing out the obvious.pango
- Seriously? Way to take constructive crit.freedom
- freedom0
Red says "industrial" more than "nature" to me.
- monospaced0
Nothing about that says "natural" to me. It looks like it's trying to be te by on purpose actually. It's also doesn't result in a particularly attractive word form. Plus what fate said.
- Complexfruit0
BillGates is just trolling us all folks...he's using tOki's work I would assume from viewing this thread: Got brett b@ashed - http://www.qbn.com/topics/684268…
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- fuckn lolGeorgesIV
- wow... thx sherlock!pango
- nice work Complexfruit!ohhhhhsnap
- BillGates0
to complexfruit,
prove it,
this is just hearsay, maybe toki stole my work!!
- dbloc0
oh geez. this thread needs to die and gates needs to be banned. the end.
- pango0
well toki got a free crit...
- dbloc0
Hi Arno. Are you going to add this to your portfolio?
http://www.neofuturism.net/- isn't doxing instant ban too? you should relax, toke one and go to bedBillGates
- ukit20
Bill Gates stole someone's work? What a surprise