New Site... Crit Please!
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- whhipp0
Stick to what you know best... obviously you were trained in technical drawings and general packaging... please, for the love of God, put the logo/identity package design down and slowly step away.
- bumdrizzle0
I had a fuf once. It was brilliant.
- ahli0
I'd do a site in the style of those tech. illustrations! very nice
- newuser0
GET AN INTERNSHIP.
- e-pill0
your engineered mechanical illustrations are the strongest part of the site. i feel it dominates the rest of your work as it looks more professional. they are very clear and visually amazing
you should do more industrial design illustrations. or add more to your portfolio.
- Complexfruit0
— I really like your technical illustrations, I think those are your strongest work.
— Give more padding in between each portfolio piece, right now it feels too cramped.
— On some of your images there are two rules on the top (a dark gray, and a lighter gray), think about eliminating both as they might not be necessary.
- hellobotto0
Please scrap the "since/established 1977" unless you have been developing concepts and securing contracts for the last 35 years. This "I've been creative since I was born" trend needs to stop.
Where's the Punches For thread?
- ya, this will be gone. Got the message on that one! Thanks.adamm
- utopian0
make the arrows bigger!
- qTime0
Its perfect as it is. Your type of clients will love it.
- newuser0
Did you go to school?
- albums0
your sites are all kinda cookie cutter... not much design, all layout, lump all those into "Web design" and get rid of the internet browser chrome. Take all the logos and make them their own entries, you'll benefit from the use of white space around each of them instead of all grouped together. reorder the list to technical illustrations, individual logos, then web design. also, use pngs or check the compression on your jpgs, something went wonky when you sized them down, looking kinda rough.
- doesnotexist0
the bean bags are weird and i don't know if saying using licensed characters is designing.
- Was going to write the same thing.newuser
- Come on, you didn't do anything on that project.newuser
- actually went many rounds with them, added many elements, laid out many designs.adamm
- hahahahahqTime
- :)adamm
- well show THAT then. cause these look like wal-mart product shots.doesnotexist
- I see no process or design thinking in the pics.newuser
- flyingnowhere0
Some navigation for the slides would be nice for user feedback.
- d_rek0
BUT IS IT RESPONSIVE???
- monospaced0
You spelled "Technical" wrong on your Technical illustrations slide.