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New Site... Crit Please! 2727 Responses
Last post: 10 months, 1 week ago | Thread started: Jul 19, 12, 10:32 a.m.
Out of context: Response #4 [Jul 19, 12, 10:32 a.m.]
- bjladams
Seems visually confusing to have a distressed logo with a glow over a stark digital background.
I'd advise that you get someone to help you with your copy writing.
Visually, the first image in each slider seems odd without consistency - some are cropped, some are full width, some are fading out, some of the backgrounds have a gradient...
Also, a 'contact' section would help - not just a contact form... but info on where you are and how I could reach you-- otherwise you seem like you're lurking in the shadows.
And I don't mean to be rude, but years ago I had a jimdo.com theme that was eerily similar to this layout.
What I do like is that it's simple and straightforward.

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