New Site... Crit Please!

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  • bjladams0

    Seems visually confusing to have a distressed logo with a glow over a stark digital background.

    I'd advise that you get someone to help you with your copy writing.

    Visually, the first image in each slider seems odd without consistency - some are cropped, some are full width, some are fading out, some of the backgrounds have a gradient...

    Also, a 'contact' section would help - not just a contact form... but info on where you are and how I could reach you-- otherwise you seem like you're lurking in the shadows.

    And I don't mean to be rude, but years ago I had a jimdo.com theme that was eerily similar to this layout.

    What I do like is that it's simple and straightforward.

    • Thanks, appreciate the comments. Site may have old layout, but I wanted something quick , easyadamm

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