Grayden Poper
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- studderine0
toe_knee is a douche.
- hektor9110
cool stuff
- akrok0
hot stuff!
- studderine0
I approve this message.
- rupedixon0
too much god for me...
- Frosty_spl0
Great site, great work!
- toe_knee0
I'd give it to his wife.
- < this made me laughKnuckleberry
- except his wife appreciates talent.studderine
- wordssssss0
Nice stuff. BUT I counted three orphans in his descriptions and stopped looking. I know it's the web and blah blah blah but that shouldnt be acceptable on a designers portfolio. Also alot of use of 'I' .
So the critique here is sweat the details, which I know I can do alot more as well.- WONT SOMEBODY THINK OF THE CHILDREN!!Hombre_Lobo
- LOL i made a joke on the word orphans! you get it?... no no, i mean ORPHANED CHILDREN!Hombre_Lobo
- alot = joke?toodee
- MarleyMarl0
1. You're going to knock an "over-used" font and replace that with another "over-used" font? Smart.
2. Learn what orphans and widows are then go back over your site and clean it up. This says that you're uneducated on the art of typography.
3. Learn who to write with proper grammar. If you can't, hire someone to do the writing for you.
4. Couldn't you just a fake a few names instead of repeating Mike Jones three times and naming another person Lorem Ipsum.
5. WTF mate?
6. Your kerning could use some work.
Overall the work is visually aesthetic, but very unrefined. If he paid more attention to the fine details and technical flaws this work could be top notch. Seems very junior.
- Hombre_Lobo0
^jokes aside, really nice work and cool/fun site.
The wide images are bold, but if it were my site i would worry about how it renders on small screens when it doesnt appear to resize. This is entirely relevant to your audience of course.
- climbatree0
when hassling a classic type face shouldn't you make sure you drop widows and orphans > "I" < am just saying...........
- climbatree0
when hassling a classic type face shouldn't you make sure you drop widows and orphans > "I" < am just saying...........
- Continuity0
I find the whole 'Just my thoughts. No big deal' schtick a bit annoying.
- UKV0
Solid work, really like the layout and the color choices.
- duhsign0
nav and scrolling break on the ipad. oooooops. fire your "developer"
- domacle0
First thing I noticed before the (high quality work) was this sentence:
"This is just some of things I wanted to be when I grew up but instead I ended up as a interactive designer. You can view my work and thoughts about design below. I hope you enjoy"
I thought I'd rewrite it for him;
"These are some of the things I wanted to be when I grew up, but instead, I ended up as an Interactive Designer. You can view my work and read my thoughts about design below. I hope you enjoy."
Grammar (and I probably got something wrong myself) Nazi aside, he's got quite a high calibre of work on display.
- I charge £350 per day and that just took me 3 minutes.domacle
- Someone owes me £2.18domacle
- LOL, send that mother an invoice! :DHombre_Lobo
- 'ended up as...' doesn't sound good however you spin it.calculator