Grayden Poper

Out of context: Reply #16

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  • MarleyMarl0

    1. You're going to knock an "over-used" font and replace that with another "over-used" font? Smart.

    2. Learn what orphans and widows are then go back over your site and clean it up. This says that you're uneducated on the art of typography.

    3. Learn who to write with proper grammar. If you can't, hire someone to do the writing for you.

    4. Couldn't you just a fake a few names instead of repeating Mike Jones three times and naming another person Lorem Ipsum.

    5. WTF mate?

    6. Your kerning could use some work.

    Overall the work is visually aesthetic, but very unrefined. If he paid more attention to the fine details and technical flaws this work could be top notch. Seems very junior.

    • Yeah I was really surprised he didnt say he was over gotham...duhsign
    • Didn't realize he asked for a crit. lol.canuck

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