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- Alia0
Thnx for Everyone Checked the site
- Alia0
Thnx for Everyone Checked the site
- mistakesarebeautiful0
meh
- Alia0
yeah double click issue lol
- abettertomorrow0
Nice job
- Alia0
Thnx
- pillhead0
Nice, could do with some Information text on each project which would be good.
- pango0
would really like to left justify your bio
- abettertomorrow0
Your bio is missing a space after Nike,
- pango0
is it just me or that all your text is a bit blurry?
- Alia0
yeah, i know i should put more information about the works pal. well i u click on the AA logo.. bio hide itself lol
- Alia0
yeah, i know i should put more information about the works pal. well i u click on the AA logo.. bio hide itself lol
- Alia0
damn my wacom pen sux.. double clicks everytime i tap on the tablet...arrrrghhh!!!
- formula0
looks like student work.
- from 2003formula
- I've been told not to talk like that. oh well....
HIgh FIVE!!!pango - and you look like a cunt.bumdrizzle
- fuck. i knew these shoes were fucking trash.formula
- Alia0
;) thnx formula
- luckyorphan0
Looks like solid design work. It shows a good head for design and conceptualization, while focusing on a market (seemingly high-end products and brands).
Your series called "Tamek" was not as strong as some of the work above it, IMO. I'd either remove it or move it down, if you must have it.
Cut your "Yeni Raki" series way down. 66 images is far too many.
Same thing for the rest of your subjects. No one wants to page through dozens of images on one subject. Pick your top ten (or less) and leave it at that.
I would remove your series called "Vodka" as it doesn't feel as finished as the rest.
Less is more.
And don't listen to the haters. Just keep pushing yourself, and do good work.
- Dodecahedron0
critique
- decisionman0
My only real issue is the text – but that's not on you, that's on Krop using Cufon. Super gross.
The work is beautiful, tho. Makes me self-conscious – perfect :)
- utopian0
Interesting work an style, and I like the Krop theme that you have chosen.
- formula0
critique vs. pep talk