Critic on Portfolio
Critic on Portfolio
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- luckyorphan0
Looks like solid design work. It shows a good head for design and conceptualization, while focusing on a market (seemingly high-end products and brands).
Your series called "Tamek" was not as strong as some of the work above it, IMO. I'd either remove it or move it down, if you must have it.
Cut your "Yeni Raki" series way down. 66 images is far too many.
Same thing for the rest of your subjects. No one wants to page through dozens of images on one subject. Pick your top ten (or less) and leave it at that.
I would remove your series called "Vodka" as it doesn't feel as finished as the rest.
Less is more.
And don't listen to the haters. Just keep pushing yourself, and do good work.