DVD cover feedback
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- fresnobob0
Definitely looks way more sophisticated.
However it totally says "BENDING THEREAL" now. Watch that space, its way too small. You could probably move the A a little closer to the E too to help out, even if it overlaps, itll be much easier to read and shouldnt look odd since the kerning is so tight anyways. I'd also keep the leading consistent for the title and subtitle, especially since you are using all caps.
- Claymantis0
- Much better...organicgrid
- Yup, like that better than the last direction.ETM
- Thanks... I think so tooClaymantis
- tymeframe0
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- scrap_paper0
Man is it ever tough to work with shitty photo assets. His collar looks like mutton chops and the shadow on the dudes head just emphasizes the egginess of him.
The left is the best layout IMO. Also detracts from the the shadow on his head.
And if you can convince him to lose the pull quote you will be better off but we all know how that will go.
- pinkfloyd0
Do you have to put his face on there?
- He wanted it. But we wil see what his feedback is.Claymantis
- Claymantis0
http://www.sankeymagic.com/detai…
His other DVD covers are really bad...
- organicgrid0
The one cover of the left is easier to read and does NOT look like one of those "For Dummies" books...
- Claymantis0
hahah good point
- boat0
yeah why have the photo at all, I don't a give a fuck what he looks like. He doesn't even look like a magician.
- monNom0
remove the photo entirely.
maybe something like...
http://www.google.ca/images?q=sa…
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- epigraph0
haha it would be awesome if they were someone elses hands. Like very obviously somebody elses.
- NONEIS0
Reshoot - and keep the hands off the face, you won't regret it.
- Josev0
I prefer the one on the left, too. The other reminds me of a crayola box. Maybe this is a bad suggestion, but can you crop in even a little more? Something about that patterned shirt bugs me. The "WITH" kinda bugs me, did you try it running bottom to top instead of top to bottom?
- epigraph0
The one on the right is good because it kinda has a "these words are coming outta my mind" feel.
I don't like like the device used though. ie the yellow tear thing.
- ETM0
I think the left one is stronger in the simplicity. However, knowing most clients, he'll go for the right.
- Claymantis0
- I do want to say that he will prob want that pull quote to REALLLY stand outepigraph
- yea I knowwwClaymantis
- Put the pull-quote on his forehead.
j/kJosev - make it look like the letters are emerging from his skinepigraph
- Leftorganicgrid
- Frosty_spl0
Reminds me of "In Living Color".