VB logo crit 3 3838 Responses

Last post: 2 years, 6 months ago | Thread started: Nov 23, 10, 4:11 p.m.

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• yeeblazer

  hey all, here some more logo comps for Virginia B. Interior design - An Interior Designer who is about to start her own company

  My initial comps were missing the mark, See previous crit here if you must:

  http://www.qbn.com/topics/645076…

  anyway - ive got some samples of her work shown as well

  

  Nov 23, 10, 4:11 p.m. – Permalink

• inteliboy

  What about just a type treatment? Not sure the logo marks are working...

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 4:15 p.m. – Permalink

• detritus

  I'm minded of impoverished towns in the south of Spain in the late 80s and seeing homespun branding attempts painted clumsily onto whitewashed walls.

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 4:15 p.m. – Permalink

• detritus

  A logo should only have one gimmick.

  If you're making a mark, use a quality accompanying font that doesn't in itself try and say anything louder than the mark itself.

  • imho, but wtf do i know?– detritus1/2

    no, this is true.– CanHazQBN2/2

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 4:17 p.m. – Permalink

• SteveJobs

  from a non-designers perspective, i like #4

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 4:21 p.m. – Permalink

• rootlock

  #4 reflects the type of interior design work she does and IMO a nice mark.

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 4:25 p.m. – Permalink

• VikingKingEleven

  I'm not sure these are working. I think you are getting to caught up in the V and B.

  What other symbols could you use? Modern flower, star, furniture?

  What about a stylized V with a nice type treatment?

  Another note I think 4 has the most potential out of that group.

  • little late to the party– VikingKingEleven1/2

    Agreed. Maybe have a symbol/logo accompanied with strong type treamtment for Virgina B Interior Design– instrmntl2/2

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 4:25 p.m. – Permalink

• bjladams

  fourth photo down - yeah, i have that furniture. wish i could go back and tell my past self that buying it is gonna be a bad decision. it was hard enough to keep clean- but now i've got 2 kids that cover the thing in drool and other liquids - now the furniture looks like it has skin cancer...

  and my favorite mark is the 4th one down- but without the "VB" and then justifying the text

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 4:43 p.m. – Permalink

• akrok

  

  • << http://new.myfonts.c…– akrok1/3

    $28 for the 230 one. (thin)– akrok2/3

    charge the client.– akrok3/3

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 4:47 p.m. – Permalink

• akrok

  bump cause this needs a make-over. ;-)

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 7:14 p.m. – Permalink

• tOki

  I thought it was going to be about this

  

  • she is quite BITTER. lol.– akrok

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 7:15 p.m. – Permalink

• honestIy

  

  • love this– liveforever1/2

    Nice, for a heavy metal band - possibly just the sharp edges, needs to be a little more elegant imo– matnz2/2

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 9:39 p.m. – Permalink

• utopian

  To be honest they all look amateurish...

  • Please Read!
    http://www.itcfonts.…– utopian1/2

    In one ear out the other...– utopian2/2

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 9:53 p.m. – Permalink

• honestIy

  

  • Looks like something Nike would create– desmo

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 9:57 p.m. – Permalink

• instrmntl

  Mine are complete shit, but, just real simple type. the bottom left is a place holder for some type of logo of whatevs. Or a logo could go above or next to any of the type. whatevs, i dunno.

  

  • er bottom right– instrmntl1/3

    the top right was a quick bad attempt at a B, hence the offset.– instrmntl2/3

    i like the bottom right– VikingKingEleven3/3

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 10:02 p.m. – Permalink

• honestIy

  

  • << i mean this.– instrmntl1/2

    This just reminds me of the Dr Evil logo....– orrinward2/2

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 10:05 p.m. – Permalink

• desmo

  Keep it simple

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 10:33 p.m. – Permalink

• cannonball1978

  1) There are way too many competing elements in your logos.

  2) It still looks like a salon shampoo logo, as previously stated.

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 10:48 p.m. – Permalink

• cannonball1978

  I would suggest adjusting the name. The "B" is what seems to fuck it all up. If you spelled out her last name, or just had her last name, I would feel like I'd want to take her seriously and pay her money to get my living room did, as opposed to getting my hair did.

  • Unless her name is Bumbquat or something.– instrmntl

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 10:59 p.m. – Permalink

• cannonball1978

  I would also suggest taking this off the illustrator grid and onto the sketchbook. You're snapping to the grid too much which is making it feel cold and masculine. Also, if you must have "interior design" then there can only be one other element. Three elements makes an unholy trifecta for logos.

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 11:01 p.m. – Permalink

• cannonball1978

  Also, based on her photos, I'm getting more of an organic feel for her work than the logos seem to be conveying. It might be the woods she uses but it feels sort of danish modern.

  

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  Dog-earNov 23, 10, 11:03 p.m. – Permalink