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VB logo crit 3 3838 Responses
Last post: 2 years, 5 months ago | Thread started: Nov 23, 10, 4:11 p.m.
- yeeblazer
hey all, here some more logo comps for Virginia B. Interior design - An Interior Designer who is about to start her own company
My initial comps were missing the mark, See previous crit here if you must:
http://www.qbn.com/topics/645076…
anyway - ive got some samples of her work shown as well
- Nov 23, 10, 4:11 p.m. – Permalink
- VikingKingEleven
I'm not sure these are working. I think you are getting to caught up in the V and B.
What other symbols could you use? Modern flower, star, furniture?
What about a stylized V with a nice type treatment?
Another note I think 4 has the most potential out of that group.


- Dog-earNov 23, 10, 4:25 p.m. – Permalink
- bjladams
fourth photo down - yeah, i have that furniture. wish i could go back and tell my past self that buying it is gonna be a bad decision. it was hard enough to keep clean- but now i've got 2 kids that cover the thing in drool and other liquids - now the furniture looks like it has skin cancer...
and my favorite mark is the 4th one down- but without the "VB" and then justifying the text


- Dog-earNov 23, 10, 4:43 p.m. – Permalink
- cannonball1978
1) There are way too many competing elements in your logos.
2) It still looks like a salon shampoo logo, as previously stated.


- Dog-earNov 23, 10, 10:48 p.m. – Permalink
- cannonball1978
I would suggest adjusting the name. The "B" is what seems to fuck it all up. If you spelled out her last name, or just had her last name, I would feel like I'd want to take her seriously and pay her money to get my living room did, as opposed to getting my hair did.

- Dog-earNov 23, 10, 10:59 p.m. – Permalink
- cannonball1978
I would also suggest taking this off the illustrator grid and onto the sketchbook. You're snapping to the grid too much which is making it feel cold and masculine. Also, if you must have "interior design" then there can only be one other element. Three elements makes an unholy trifecta for logos.


- Dog-earNov 23, 10, 11:01 p.m. – Permalink
- cannonball1978
Also, based on her photos, I'm getting more of an organic feel for her work than the logos seem to be conveying. It might be the woods she uses but it feels sort of danish modern.


- Dog-earNov 23, 10, 11:03 p.m. – Permalink









