Logo Crit 2.5 2929 Responses

Last post: 2 years, 6 months ago | Thread started: Nov 17, 10, 3:22 p.m.

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• yeeblazer

  Hey guys, hopefully these are improvements -

  Recap: Interior Designer, who is starting her own company

  Original crit/post: http://www.qbn.com/topics/645016…

  

  dig in.

  Nov 17, 10, 3:22 p.m. – Permalink

• dbloc

  see original critiques.

  • you one tough critic dbloc - i like it, but i need more to take you seriously...– yeeblazer

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 3:25 p.m. – Permalink

• dbloc

  1. NO
  2. NO
  3. NO

  • now that's constructive criticism for ya!!!!– Projectile

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 3:26 p.m. – Permalink

• dbloc

  Terrior Design

  

  • woof!– akrok

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 3:27 p.m. – Permalink

• decisionman

  I think if you work on 1, it could be really strong!

  • worst one.– CanHazQBN1/2

    untrue– honestly2/2

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 3:32 p.m. – Permalink

• bjladams

  I think the top one - but loose the vb and just leave the type.

  • < this– horton1/3

    lose the . and maybe work the dropping R– horton2/3

    yes, what horton said.– heathen3/3

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 3:37 p.m. – Permalink

• horton

  sorry but to be honest i still think you're going about this all wrong.

  ... unless this Virginia B. is a super zany interior designer.

  • gonna see about getting good examples of her work this weekend– yeeblazer

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 3:38 p.m. – Permalink

• yeeblazer

  dbloc - most of the initial critiques fell under three categories:

  Didn't read as VB,
  Didn't look like "interior design"
  Were overworked, overdesigned

  these are what I focused on this round - did I fail? where/how so?

  • your B in VB is lowercase, doesn't match type.. and the V is just lost– horton

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 3:38 p.m. – Permalink

• VectorMasked

  I don't get interior design from any of those.
  1) reminds me of Prince and some death metal bands.
  2) doesn't work. type and iconography are not working together.
  3) the complete opposite of what interior design is.

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 3:42 p.m. – Permalink

• akrok

  drop the all caps, in her name. AS ITS HARDER TO READ!

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 3:43 p.m. – Permalink

• pinkfloyd

  I'm not fond of any of them, but it could be worse I guess

  

  • This is incredible. You should stop designing now if you think this is bad.– matnz1/3

    How is this good?– pinkfloyd2/3

    Its a girl sucking off a guy– jasonabc3/3

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 3:44 p.m. – Permalink

• dbloc

  1. Not feeling the icon at all...too rockin for an interior designer
  2. Needs to say Virginia B. The icon is not recognizable enough to substitute.
  3. I see terrior design.

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 3:48 p.m. – Permalink

• goldieboy

  Who's the market she's aiming at... $$ or $$$$?
  What's her style... classic, modern etc?
  Does she have a website we could look at for some visual ref?

  • website is to come later - she's just getting started.– yeeblazer1/4

    and considering the time im having with the logo, i cant wait to have you guys crit that.– yeeblazer2/4

    post-up the samples of her work when you get them– goldieboy3/4

    I think you're taking the crit well blazzer... you'll crack it eventually– goldieboy4/4

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 3:49 p.m. – Permalink

• dbloc

  you really need to figure out her design style before you continue because that's pretty important especially for a designer.

  • gonna focus on that this weekend - wont post again till I have it down– yeeblazer

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 3:49 p.m. – Permalink

• pinkfloyd

  On the first logo, I don't get a V or a B. The overall shape looks terrible.

  • it's clearly a bird trying to get up off the ground.– dbloc1/2

    It looks like he dissected two different letters, and glued them together without any thought of aesthetics or harmony.– pinkfloyd2/2

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 3:54 p.m. – Permalink

• pinkfloyd

  I do like the logo on your site though.

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 4:03 p.m. – Permalink

• watchamakalit

  i don't really like em much..
  but if theres no other choice id go for #3
  and work on tons of revisions.

  one is to emphasize the INTERIOR.

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 6:59 p.m. – Permalink

• CanHazQBN

  it's great! go with it!

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 8:11 p.m. – Permalink

• akrok

  did you try my font suggestion? (from your round 2)

  • < i dont have the $$ to buy it– yeeblazer

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 8:18 p.m. – Permalink

• ali

  Not sure if this would suit her style but what if no1 was a more classic serif style like the rough below so it appears like a structural column in the middle
  

  

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 9:47 p.m. – Permalink

• desmo

  You really need to work on your font choice and type setting. All 3 logos seem very mismatched. Again, it seems like you are trying to over design it.

  

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  Dog-earNov 17, 10, 9:54 p.m. – Permalink