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- fxone0
^ 2 fish fucking
- monospaced0
I agree with ukit. And if you drop the size of the mark the weights will start to match those in the type and hopefully draw attention away from the nose. Overall, I absolutely love it. It's original and well thought out and executed.
- monospaced0
I would also like to see you destroy the symmetry somehow. Throw it off a bit by moving a dot off-center, or throwing something slightly off angle. It may add interest and add to the hand-crafted aspect.
- Ctrlx0
Didn't read the post so I didn't know it was a butcher. I initially thought it looked like an old printing press.
- set0
Definitely doesn't feel complete yet but I really like it so far. Look forward to seeing it finished!
- nobrandlikehome0
The C and S kind of get lost. Have you tried keeping the letters black and scaling the rest of the cow down to gray?
- JSK0
I like it
and what Neue said
- neue75_bold0
nice tits!
- it's cute, but feels a bit too floaty...neue75_bold
- let's see it applied though, might be perfect!neue75_bold
- lol!!!!AVAVA
- stewart0
the circle parts of the S are not smoothly connected.
oh and what neue said.
- uan0
somehow I read cowbell&sons (cause of the abstract cow)
- rybo0
i like the gotham, but the mark isn't sophisticated enough...and does it have to use C & S in it! We already know its campbell and sons
- sorry forgot to mention, they want to use the logo without the name on quite alot of stuff... like a stamp.indian_pole
- ukit0
Can see where you're headed with it, and I like the idea, but it's not quite there yet... the nostrils/ boobs are drawing too much attention.
- +1rybo
- I do like it though...the simplicity and the "drawn" quality...seems almost Paul Rand-likeukit
- agreedmonospaced
- ukit0
On the other hand, if it was a slaughterhouse AND a stripclub, this would truly be a work of genius
- pango0
tits and balls?
- detritus0
If this were for the American market, I'd suggest possibly trying to merge the CS cow form into a brand (as in *tssschht*).
- Jimbo820
Quirky, needs tweeks but I like it
- itstimefortea0
the logo might be nice reversed out of a shape. might be less 'floaty' that way. I agree with the comment about the line weights. try applying it to a few things and see how it looks.