Lime logo critique
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- airey0
have you tried it without the leaves?
- marychain0
I'm not seeing lime in version b that well either to be honest.
Really don't like how the leaf just kisses the top of the Q either
- rodzilla0
what about a lime wedge?
- utopian0
remove the bunny ears.
- sofakingbanned0
B( . )( . )BS
- airey0
also, another version could be the live amd leaves with a diagonal and the negative space reversed out so the lime and leaves become the 'q' rather than the hole in the 'q'.
- sofakingbanned0
keep the lefs but put an outline around them or the lime.
I just dont see a lime or fruit right now. i do see tits though- never crit after fappingrodzilla
- ... during??? multitasksofakingbanned
- hire him to do your logo. he wastes no time.rodzilla
- d_rek0
Is this an initial exploration? That's what im getting from it.
The lime is a hard read in A or B. At a glance it just looks like a Q with something wrong with it. Upon closer inspection you have not-so-gracefully clipped the shape of a lime out of Q and created an awkward letterform.
There are lots of places you could take this. In it's current stage it feels half-baked and unrefined. Keep pushing the forms, both of the lime and Q. Is there another type of Q you can use? Is there better/more refined way to represent the lime?
- lukus_W0
There's no reason why the leaves need to be top right.. rotate 90 degrees.
- orrinward0
The leaves are what makes it not look stand out as a lime. The basic shape of a lime to me is an oval with a nipple on each end.
Like a lemon but stumpier.
- lukus_W0
... and more importantly, who or what is the logo actually for?
- airey0
anyone that sees tits needs to go out this weekend and meet someone. man, woman, a one-nighter, a long term, a future divorce partner, anyone. because you my friends, are a little fucked up at present.
- stop being such a hot juicy plump booooooob!iCanHasQBN
- the bottom area doesn't look like a tit to you??? I think if you see boobs in random things you're working properlysofakingbanned
- maybe i'm a repressed homosexual.airey
- nocomply0
Does it really need 2 leaves? I think it would look better with 1, if done a little differently.
Also, I like the idea mentioned of outlining the lime/leaves and adding some more detail to it.
In terms of shape I think "b" is better.
- chris_himself0
needs more work in my opinion. the leaves don't look right, its as if there growing from the side of the lime opposed to the top. one leaf might be enough, these two are a bit too symmetrical which isn't helping to identify the lime shape.
- jay_tuck0
Wow! Thanks for all the feedback. I really value what you all have to say as I feel you're all quite a bit more talented then I. At least, based on what I see here.
Anyway, I'm working on a few more options. Some more B( . )( . )B like, others less so...
To answer some of the questions: Yes, this is a first go 'round after initial sketches, and the final usage will be for a food related website.
- dMullins0
The leaves need more personality to give it a better overall shape. Thinned, more angles.
- lukus_W0
What type of person is the logo meant to apeal to?
- bukka0
i see a sea turtle, would have not thought of a lime if you didn't tell me