Logo Crit
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- Raniator0
Needs more alignment maybe. Can you get the blue into the copy?
- uan0
- tooVan_Glorious
- I'm not sure that this has any relevance whatsoever.dMullins
- bumdrizzle0
it is a good start, but maye you could try another colour way and play around with your type. maybe adjust the logo too.
- indian_pole0
have to say i had higher hopes for this when i read it in the paper this morning! http://www.bnsc.gov.uk/News-and-…
- vivid0
its reminds me of something...bugging the hell of of me..??
- Raniator0
- You'd need to align the left edge the flag with the S of SPACE and extend/modify the arrow to fit.Raniator
- Not sure how do-able that would be in view to keeping it square though...Raniator
- yesProjectile
- pizzafire0
Doctor Who!?! Haha!
- Fax_Benson0
Also reminds me slightly of the Dads Army intro. Maybe the arrowhead could be more representative of space/rockets somehow?
- mydo0
- indian_pole0
i take it you work for these guys http://www.foliocreative.co.uk
- d_rek0
Not crazy about either. The type feels dated, with some weird kerning between A and C. The mark is has a lot of awkward, competitive negative space. Ultimately it feels like it's the product of a junior designer who did little or no exploration of form and type. Just my two cents.
- detritus0
The one bit I do kinda like is the deference to a traditional font, though I think they could have made its integration more modern and meatier somehow.
The form itself is dire, I think. Aside from the vexing closeness to an uncontained explosion, its form seems too fragile and dainty to have much impact on the side of a 100 foot tall rocket or in constrained freefall on some orbital platform.
This thing feels like it was never intended for use beyond the boardroom's stationery.
I'd much rathered they'd gone with a modern, pointy, interpretation of the RAF symbology...
...simple, graphic - truer to our glorious ex-Hegemon's milito-corporates roots.
- hitsuji0
- wait... ive been beaten to it. epic fail. right, back to workhitsuji
- moronWeLoveNoise
- doesnotexist0
work on your shapes
- pillhead0
Align the thing up, FFS
- bulletfactory0
I think you're going to run into problems with trapped whitespace
- dirtydesign0
that typeface is terrible.
use something with a little more style.
- MCR0
Bland awful type with no personality, doesn't reflect or add tension to whats happening with the shattered square logo. The whole right alignment seems strange as well.