Scripty Modifications
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- evanmade
http://typophile.com/files/Final…
I am working this out and wanting some feedback. I think the little entrance stroke on the S is too much. I am sure that some other parts need some more love.
Thanks!
Evan
- lvl_130
just drop it on imageshack yo!
- Andy_ssw0
print it out and draw over the top, the best way to work out curves like these.
- acescence0
the y is penetrating the q, very sexual. at least that's what my perverted mind sees.
- jurassica0
typography isn't really my thing, but there seems to be a lack of continuity with your loops. Why does the first A loop through when the second A doesn't. The entrance stroke on the S (like you said) needs work and perhaps you could try changing the entrance stroke on the H to look like the J but in the opposite direction? The tails on the Y and H clash a little rather than compliment but overall the type has a pretty feel to it.
- Josev0
I think the S looks like it's slightly heavier than the other characters and I'm not sure about the entrance loop, as you called it. Also, I'm kind of bothered by the way the end of the J's lower loop cuts through the a. Maybe make the J's loop bigger, more open and have it connect at the top of the a?
- I think it looks good overall. I dont mind the overlap of they's tail with the q, but the h's doesnt feel right. It's too angular. The counter in the a, the beginning loop on the cap S and the tail of the h create tension points for me.Josev
- angular and doesnt have the nice curves of the other forms. The counter in the a, the beginning loop on the cap S and the tail of the h create tension points for me.Josev
- and the tail of the h create tension points for me.Josev
- evanmade0
Good thoughts. Thanks all.