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- akrokdesign0
oh, this went well. :-)
- FredMcWoozy0
better segmentation and you have some widows creeping around. The readability is kind of messed up but overall everything needs to be tightened up. That sign in button is really annoying me.
- erikjonsson0
all the ads are out of place? like 20px off in different directions.
- svpplier0
Wow this is a great way to get a Client to see wtf is going on. Put it on QBN
- brandelec0
looks like a powerpoint website
- utopian0
Clusterfuck®
- meffid0
Rybo?
- McEnroe0
I don't work for them, I was just asked to provide some criticism for their site. I provided them my feedback and thought I would ask you guys as well. Thanks for your help...
- mg330
- dMullins0
This site could have used a designer.
- margotjames0
do you work for the Shep?
- Knuckleberry0
Your cascio banner is all jacked in Safari
- McEnroe0
good comments, exactly along the thoughts I had..
- run.dropdown
- Shut up jerk, just tighten stuff up, it takes years before you know what the hell you're doing.FredMcWoozy
- detritus0
There's a lot of fonts fighting for attention in there.
Structure and spacing is inconsistent and messy - you have completely different mechanics for highlighting sections - coloured bars, horizontal an vertical - other-coloured circles - some bits are outlined, some aren't. Your header's massively squashed up, whilst your eader items are far-too spaced.
Poor hierarchy.
Gaudy bannerage.
Frankly, it's somewhere between mostly unfinished, dire and amateur.
- it looks like you've poorly hacked the default template in some freebie CMS.detritus
- if i were to have written more than 8 words, this is what it would have been.duckseason
- duckseason0
very busy
lots of things competing for attention