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Out of context: Reply #2

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  • detritus0

    There's a lot of fonts fighting for attention in there.

    Structure and spacing is inconsistent and messy - you have completely different mechanics for highlighting sections - coloured bars, horizontal an vertical - other-coloured circles - some bits are outlined, some aren't. Your header's massively squashed up, whilst your eader items are far-too spaced.

    Poor hierarchy.

    Gaudy bannerage.

    Frankly, it's somewhere between mostly unfinished, dire and amateur.

    • it looks like you've poorly hacked the default template in some freebie CMS.detritus
    • if i were to have written more than 8 words, this is what it would have been.duckseason

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