CRIT ME!
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- digdre0
not to be harsch, but i don't like it.
- janne760
thanks for your opinion, digdre. but you never elaborate on your statement i noticed in a lot of posts.
- janne760
and no, ofcourse you are not harsh, when i ask for a crit i ask for a crit. simple as that.
- digdre0
your other site looks more professional.
this just looks dull, empty and amateurish.
the red doesn't look that good on the grayit just doesn't feel right. you can do better
- janne760
okay, i am going to do some self-analysis now.
maybe because of my poor situation i have forced myself to please a too broad market thus becoming stale and meaningless like any other (typical Dutch) stale and soulless "communication agency". and perhaps i should ask myself, should i do that or not.
- digdre0
use your other site
and make a new logo.
simple as that. i wish i had a site like that other one
- Corvo20
The structure is there & working fine. All it needs is a bit more of drawing. Not so much "communication" but a bit more craft. Also, at 1024 the main div doesn't leave room for a bg nor fills the screen, which ends up looking weird (not sure potential clients will care about this) or transmitting a feeling of incompleteness.
- mikabast0
and what happened to this logo?
- janne760
ok, in terms of lack of time it seems better to reuse and reinterpret the old one. i go with digdre's plan.
thanks for the comments!
- mattiaBK0
Nice, and simple, but I think I now understand why you want to quit design! ;-)
- jimbojones0
what was wrong with vormburo? anyway, it's a pain in the ass that you click anything in the flyout menu and it's closed once the page is loaded and you have to click something again. I wouldn't want to cycle through projects like that.
- i took that namedigdre
- who says that is going to happen that way?janne76
- what will happen?jimbojones