CRIT ME!
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- jimbojones0
what was wrong with vormburo? anyway, it's a pain in the ass that you click anything in the flyout menu and it's closed once the page is loaded and you have to click something again. I wouldn't want to cycle through projects like that.
- i took that namedigdre
- who says that is going to happen that way?janne76
- what will happen?jimbojones
- mattiaBK0
Nice, and simple, but I think I now understand why you want to quit design! ;-)
- janne760
ok, in terms of lack of time it seems better to reuse and reinterpret the old one. i go with digdre's plan.
thanks for the comments!
- mikabast0
and what happened to this logo?
- Corvo20
The structure is there & working fine. All it needs is a bit more of drawing. Not so much "communication" but a bit more craft. Also, at 1024 the main div doesn't leave room for a bg nor fills the screen, which ends up looking weird (not sure potential clients will care about this) or transmitting a feeling of incompleteness.
- digdre0
use your other site
and make a new logo.
simple as that. i wish i had a site like that other one
- janne760
okay, i am going to do some self-analysis now.
maybe because of my poor situation i have forced myself to please a too broad market thus becoming stale and meaningless like any other (typical Dutch) stale and soulless "communication agency". and perhaps i should ask myself, should i do that or not.
- digdre0
your other site looks more professional.
this just looks dull, empty and amateurish.
the red doesn't look that good on the grayit just doesn't feel right. you can do better
- janne760
and no, ofcourse you are not harsh, when i ask for a crit i ask for a crit. simple as that.
- janne760
thanks for your opinion, digdre. but you never elaborate on your statement i noticed in a lot of posts.
- digdre0
not to be harsch, but i don't like it.
- shitehawke0
Wait a second, this is a site crit? I thought we were to crit you.
- shitehawke0
You have questionable body odour and dress in the manner of a male prostitute.
- WhiteFace0
The menu makes me feel sea sick.
- janne760
i see your point. thanks for the feedback, mika.
- mikabast0
you can't make a logo or a site that every client will like. it's simply impossible... and if you're trying to make something that no client will hate you can easily achieve something real boring... like in this case in my opinion... the site's design isn't bad, it's just not enough (like many people wrote above)
sorry to say this, but with this philosophy no one will hate your site, but no one will remember it either...
- janne760
it's tough. more personality may cut off neutrality for a diversity of clients...
- ukit0
I could talk about how tasteful and muted it is, but fuck it:
-Make it full screen
-Make shit fly around
-Make the logo biggerBasically just copy the Music site and you are gold.
- kona0
this is your classic case of 'the boy who cried wolf'
you've started so many, shall i say, shitty threads, play on words threads based off of another thread and what not that when you do actually create one in which you need real responses people pay no attention to it.
lol.