www.frankdaniel.co.uk
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- dorphan
My new portfolio
Any feedback is welcome.
- jgilmore0
whats an information architect?
- Really?imadesigner
- its a digital planner.dorphan
- its the new "art director"WeLoveNoise
- It's a grandiose job title...stem
- is it fuck a digital plannerkelpie
- imadesigner0
I don't love the site. One suggestion would be to include the thumbnails on the IA section too.
- baseline_shift0
looks good. like the simplicity.
Something about the loading animation before the slideshow is wonky. odd white aliasing.
also, consider pulling 1 or 2 of the old frank daniel websites.
- Autokern0
The front-page looks very template. And those button underneath doesn't help to understand what you do while the IA section is very cluttered.
The design and development section doesn't provide any background information for the project, or which was excatly your role in the project.So add some personality to that homepage, use just one typeface for headlines, tidy up and make clearer the IA section and add info on the design/dev section.
- dorphan0
Thanks for the feedback!
- WeLoveNoise0
on the crit side - lookd like some decent work and simple site
- uncle_helv0
Not a fan of the logo (back to front Frank!) the site looks a bit uninspiring, but then again you are versed in webstandards! which is not a bad thing, but when these things control the creative process, then the end product is usually pretty boring (in my experience, anyway)
- jito0
It stands up well compared to the .com version...
- Kate_Henlay0
The portfolio is good.
- eating_tv0
"Willing to relocate!" lol
- dorphan0
yeah who is called frankdaniel anyway!
- kelpie0
dude, I like your site, but this is information architecture
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Inf…
if you're s digital planner, then ace, that's a cool thing to be, but you should just call yourself that. Its far cooler than the above dry-arse shite
- twokids0
initially it looks like it was made by someone who has some skill. (I like the girl on the 'S' - cute)...but once you get into the details, things fall apart.
--> why such a huge amount of space for the banner? It looks ok, but It just irritates you to have to scroll down to see the actual work. Maybe it could be smaller?
--> you IA diagram are all shown in this tiny pop up that you then have to scroll around in....and the diagrams are too small.
--> your work is padded...its obvious, with extra stuff...weed it out!
--> the way the work is presented is bad often. The screenshot for the Harlequins site for example is horrible....
needs a LOT of polish...but the base is a decent start i suppose