Logo Crit Please
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- ukit0
OK, I will feedback.
#1 and 2 - Sorry, having trouble telling what it is.
#3 - Not bad idea, needs better execution
#4, 5 - Looked better on the first page
#6 - Kind of cool, but not sure if the ultra simplicity is appropriateHow about a refinement of #3 for the logo and use the kissing people from the first page as an illustration?
- MondoMorphic0
- And please provide feedback on the logos. :)MondoMorphic
- MondoMorphic0
A boobie bump
- MondoMorphic0
- Do you increase the boob sizes of your friends (above)ukit
- ukit0
I think you need to decide if it is gonna be "The Art Of..." or just TAOMO.
P.S. nice illustrations. Are these really friends of yours, if so need to introduce us
http://www.ericburress.com/il-ja…
- just the one on the left actually, i could care less about the otherversion3
- Thanks. The one on the left, Ly, is a friend of mine. She lives in Vancouver if you're interested. ;)MondoMorphic
- version30
just forget the faces in general. everytime i see them, it goes from logo to clipart instantly
- monospaced0
6 is kinda cool, actually
- looks like an asian character of some origin, which is goodmonospaced
- MondoMorphic0
Thanks again for all the feedback, gang! Here's round two...hopefully these suck less than the initial batch. Please let me know which (if any) you prefer.
A comment of my own: I am liking the direction of 1 and 2 but I am afraid it might be too similar to the Roxy logo (www.roxy.com). Thoughts?
- 23kon0
if its for a young audience why not create a web2.0 or iphone/apple style icon using the classic candlestick icon (above).
take the illusion into the new millennium
- blackisle0
"They are a search engine of makeout spots and they're targeting a younger crowd."
Are they doubling as a dogging site
- twokids0
the top two look like something for the heart association. you expect to be hit up for a donation.
the bottom two are more on target but too detailed. if you simplify, as others have suggested, you could even get away with the two people kissing as gay or straight....
- auejim0
the one which works in black and white
- PonyBoy0
doesn't feel like a logo really... more like a piece of clipart next to a rather hastily type set ('meh' at that) font...
the last two... not felling them at all... they look like mud at the scale they're at now - the imagery is well.. muddy... blends into nothing clever... two heads jammed together?
find some beautiful lines in the faces... work them w/some nice typography... perhaps incorporating your heart shape...
... but these are exactly what you said... quickly slapped together...
... not much holding any of these together.
Just being honest. :)
- monNom0
the idea behind 1c could be interesting if it was stripped down and stylized to work in 1 colour. too much happening now.
though there's a lot you could do outside of hearts and literal translation. keep at it.
- akrokdesign0
try 1b as one solid color/colour.
- MondoMorphic0
Thanks everybody - I know these are rough but I have a lot to go on now!
- version30
where are the 1 colors of c and d?