not actual logo crit
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- NotByHand0
I like where this is going, Janne :) (Design-wise)
Btw, did you get the emails from both Tim and I yesterday?
- moamoa0
current state?
- janne760
- did you try didot?magnificent_ruin
- the S from AG looks like it will fall over. you didn´t modify the RM?moamoa
- S O kerning ? laalallamoamoa
- it's not definitive.. i am not even sure about the akzidenz, so that is why i did not kern it so precisely :)janne76
- ja... AG doesn´t fit to Bodoni ;)moamoa
- the letters are definitly not elegantmoamoa
- yeah, i'll try NZ now..janne76
- i liked the ext. of AG.. not many fonts have it like that.. typically luxurious, but perhaps not with bodoni..janne76
- monNom0
That PAN Amsterdam was nice in a heavy sans. Maybe didot/bodoni isn't right for VORM?
shabby kerning:
http://sampler.linotype.com/mls?…
- moamoa0
Kill the horse ;)
- janne760
ok everyone hates the horse.. is the humour not obvious?
should i move the direction of aesthetics only?
and choose something more timeless?
suggestions for the mark?
- I don´t get it... I mean the humourmoamoa
- butwhat do I know.
I am studying this shit http://de.wikipedia.…moamoa - I think the unicorn is a very funny play on luxury brand bullshitmagnificent_ruin
- Eero Aarnio would say: a vorm is a vorm is a vormmoamoa
- magnificent_ruin0
I think the unicorn is a very funny play on luxury brand bullshit
- or at least funnymagnificent_ruin
- or at least semi funnymagnificent_ruin
- ukit0
No way....keep the horse. It would not be funny without the horse.
- moamoa0
hmmm... I would say about 90% of the luxury logos are pure type solutions.
- Diamond would look awesome instead of Bodoni ;)
http://typographica.…
moamoa - true. and most are pretty meticulously crafted. so it is not just bs.. even though in the greater scheme of things they might be.. ;)janne76
- might be.. ;)janne76
- inspired by the hand lettered Prada logomoamoa
- moa must be kidding!janne76
- Diamond would look awesome instead of Bodoni ;)
- janne760
would people feel the layout on the prev. page to be overly hinting at luxury only? i was planning to have a layer beneath when clicking on portfolio and it would show a pretty random matrix of items (read logo's/print/web) i have selected for my portfolio.. making it somewhat more playful.. it would get more playful items further on..
- max_prophet0
STFU moamoa you are boring everyone to death.
the first one was fine, 4 pages of this is truly beating a dead horse.
x
- or unicornmax_prophet
- do you pee in the shower?moamoa
- are you in the shower?max_prophet
- janne760
jesus max, chill out.
i quite dig moa's help here.
- janne760
moa, (et al)
i tried using a sans for VORM, but none of the ones i tried worked so well. I think with PAN (amsterdam, posted earlier in this thread), it did. perhaps because it has 1 letter less, was widely kerned and had no friggin' R in it! Because most R's in the sans i tried suck. In Helvetica it seems too humanist and in some others the leg extends too far out..
- janne760
help me on more sans suggestions, for the love of god! :(
- ukit0
-Logo feels too big on the site
-Not sure I understand the gold bars. Is that where the work will appear?