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- skt0
neither work that well, i would take a new crop of the photo and lose the wall on the left.
- tried that, but without the wall its just a endless black hole..autoflavour
- agreed. I wouldn´t call it a black hole, I would say its free space you needmoamoa
- I agree that the wall should b cropped it. It's creating tension in the layout. I tend to look back and forth between the wall and the pole.Josev
- and the pole.Josev
- tparsons0
// You need to change out the HELLO sticker with a bigger one...
- pylon0
Centre the logo at the top within the black column?
And listen to lvl_13.
- autoflavour0
man that is crazy. I know Oli hasnt seen this, but that is exactly what this exhibition is. he got A3 sized hello my name is stickers and have 40 or so international artists to contribute..
people like Alias, Steckdose, Mateo, Flying Fortress..
- Yeah, the 'my name is' sticker thing as kind of run its course, imho.pylon
- it is a sticker museum who is doing it.autoflavour
- Ahh, gotcha.
:)pylon
- mayo0
what about putting a black overlay on the wall, but adjusting the transparency to let it show through a little?
- airey0
personally i think the first version feels better. your one seems an odd placement to me. but, that's design, we're all different.
- pylon0
It might be really dramatic with the logo placement where the client wants and the background a solid, rich black.
- Llyod0
remove the crap on the lower left corner and place the logo there
- skt0
- you need to do something with the 'presents' too by the way.skt
- <----- Yeah, like that.pylon
- and is that splatter part of the logo? if not, i would lose that too.skt
- just the logo, and then maybe have 'presents' in white in a tag style font.skt
- splatter is part of the logo.
autoflavour - < do it like thatComplexfruit
- tparsons0
That would be an interesting visit...
- it is, i have been helping out there the past few months and its awesome.autoflavour
- moamoa0
listen to skt...
- Llyod0
do a turkey drawing with your hand
- i would rather draw my hand with a turkeyautoflavour
- well, tofurkey.. cant be hurting a turkey now can iautoflavour
- NotByHand0
Can you get rid of that horrid logo all together?
That would be my preference.- logo staysautoflavour
- not mine, pre-brandedautoflavour
- Sorry about that.NotByHand
- dont be sorry, i didnt do it. im not a fan, but you gotta work with what you gotautoflavour
- autoflavour0
thanks for your feedback .. its been good to get some considered advice..
i think i will just shuffle the wall over a bit more .. give the logo a bit more space. the wall was a something that was definitely liked by the client..
as for the presents part.. yep skt, its not really working, but there is also a reverse side of this card and its all in the same font.. it would look a bit odd to just have presents in a different font...
not sure what Llyod's comment was about.. but thanks for sharing anyway Llyod..
- the turkey comment that is..autoflavour
- That's Llyod for you, af.pylon
- Gifto0
I've learned with flyers that the best way is to get in and out - they usually don't pay much and end up in the street anyways. Fix it quick and go to bed.
- meffid0
Clients are morons.
How often do you question a Dr. prescription?