feedback on logo
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- MrOneHundred0
You could try and do something with the threads, like incorporate the E and T initials into the weave, and maybe get some dimensionality happening.
- pylon0
^^^ Agreed.
Maybe by making the threads the same line-weight as your font? The 't' could easily be incorporated into one of the threads if you wanted.
- Corvo20
can't quite understand why you ask for opinion with so much limitations.
- 3point141590
the typeface and color palette do not seem to be hitting the mark
- tasty0
this feels like it's for maxi pads or something.
and i'm usually nice on logo critiques.
- VectorMasked0
Characters are too close together. You are having problems mostly with the e, a and s due their roundness.
The threads are what mostly need work. You could almost create a work of art if you could make them slightly more lively and realistic without making them the exact same width from one edge to the other.
- MrOneHundred0
Sorry, roberthurston, I don’t think anyone is trying to be critical here, I think there is a lot of potential if you can get the “stakeholders” to give you a chance to unlock it. I trust you have the skillZ.
- I'm being critical.
But hopefully constructively.
This has the potentialz.pylon
- I'm being critical.
- roberthuston0
Alright, alot to go on. Thanks everyone for ur input.
- VectorMasked0
...May the skillZ be with you...
- jimzyk0
In an attempt to give you some direction, I would go with the top construct you have, but try to integrate the 'weaves' with your type like someone has suggested beforehand. I would also change the typeface but this is 'set' as you have said?
don't take people's comments as negative, they're giving you an honest, educated(?), opinion...
may the force be with you.
- elpaso0
threads look messy,
dont look like threads.. - they look lik flat ribbonscolours are pretty lifeless,
font choice doesnt seem appropriate.. at least in the way you've applied it.
- dbloc0
different font, and that looks more like basket weaving than a thread. Thread is super thin.
- gramme0
Agree with brains and non, this is simply not good. At the risk of sounding harsh, I would start over. The concept is lazy and the typography is poor. The kerning in particular is all wrong.
- jevad0
K E R N I N G
- MHDC0
That y descender is pretty bad. Not very constructive, but I'm also in a mood.
- epete220
the font seems awkward
- MrOneHundred0
I think the top blue thread should be a bit tighter-in. What is the target audience? ’Coz that typeface makes me think of McCall’s sewing patterns.
- business people for organic business clothingroberthuston
- Yes, target?pylon
- d'oh, was posted at the same time.
pylon
- non0
I'm sorry Robert, but this is absolutely brutal.
- It looks like it was done in 15 seconds.non
- wow. why do u post such negative shit. use ur time more wisely.roberthuston
- He wasn't wasting time. Maybe this is how he feels. Don't see the actual insult.VectorMasked
- You asked for an opinion. You got it. I am not going to sugar coat it.non