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Last post: 3 years, 6 months ago | Thread started: Nov 13, 08, 5:19 p.m.

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  • MrOneHundred

    I think the top blue thread should be a bit tighter-in. What is the target audience? ’Coz that typeface makes me think of McCall’s sewing patterns.

    • business people for organic business clothingroberthuston1/3
      Yes, target?pylon2/3
      d'oh, was posted at the same time.

      pylon3/3
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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:22 p.m. – Permalink
  • non

    I'm sorry Robert, but this is absolutely brutal.

    • It looks like it was done in 15 seconds.non1/4
      wow. why do u post such negative shit. use ur time more wisely.roberthuston2/4
      He wasn't wasting time. Maybe this is how he feels. Don't see the actual insult.VectorMasked3/4
      You asked for an opinion. You got it. I am not going to sugar coat it.non4/4
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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:22 p.m. – Permalink
  • brains

    I kind of have to agree with non, you might want to restart.

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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:23 p.m. – Permalink
  • MrOneHundred

    So when you say “The logo is set. The type face is as well.” do you mean you can only tweak what is already in place?

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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:29 p.m. – Permalink
  • pylon

    The colour scheme, font, and *thread* treatment don't read as organic.

    I'm not saying the below logo is awesome or anything, but here's something for reference.

    http://www.typophile.com/files/organica3_3463.jpg

    • Oh crap, 100 is here. That means that I'm here too late and should go home...pylon1/4
      k. thanks.roberthuston2/4
      hahahah. I’ve been here for hours. It must be getting really late there.MrOneHundred3/4
      8:30pm only, but man it feels later! I just got back from the airport and am checking mail etc.pylon4/4
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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:29 p.m. – Permalink
  • roberthuston

    yup. I was trying to get opinion on which type orientation was better.

    • Ah.
      Disregard previous comment. Unless you're looking to start over.
      pylon
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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:30 p.m. – Permalink
  • MrOneHundred

    You could try and do something with the threads, like incorporate the E and T initials into the weave, and maybe get some dimensionality happening.

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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:31 p.m. – Permalink
  • pylon

    ^^^ Agreed.
    Maybe by making the threads the same line-weight as your font? The 't' could easily be incorporated into one of the threads if you wanted.

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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:33 p.m. – Permalink
  • Corvo2

    can't quite understand why you ask for opinion with so much limitations.

    • But even so, 2nd option looks better to me.Corvo2
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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:37 p.m. – Permalink
  • 3point14159

    the typeface and color palette do not seem to be hitting the mark

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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:37 p.m. – Permalink
  • ukit

    Reminds me of something you'd see at TJ Max or other stores I try to avoid but sometimes get dragged to by various women.

    • i totally thought the same. hanes for women or somethingshowpony
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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:40 p.m. – Permalink
  • tasty

    this feels like it's for maxi pads or something.
    and i'm usually nice on logo critiques.

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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:43 p.m. – Permalink
  • VectorMasked

    Characters are too close together. You are having problems mostly with the e, a and s due their roundness.

    The threads are what mostly need work. You could almost create a work of art if you could make them slightly more lively and realistic without making them the exact same width from one edge to the other.

    • +1
      The illusion of an elliptical cross-section could add dynamism.
      pylon1/3
      Yes, I was in client-meetings all day... Still shifting gears :)pylon2/3
      blahjimzyk3/3
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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:44 p.m. – Permalink
  • MrOneHundred

    Sorry, roberthurston, I don’t think anyone is trying to be critical here, I think there is a lot of potential if you can get the “stakeholders” to give you a chance to unlock it. I trust you have the skillZ.

    • I'm being critical.
      But hopefully constructively.
      This has the potentialz.
      pylon
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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:45 p.m. – Permalink
  • roberthuston

    Alright, alot to go on. Thanks everyone for ur input.

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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:48 p.m. – Permalink
  • VectorMasked

    ...May the skillZ be with you...

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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:51 p.m. – Permalink
  • dbloc

    different font, and that looks more like basket weaving than a thread. Thread is super thin.

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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 7:07 p.m. – Permalink
  • gramme

    Agree with brains and non, this is simply not good. At the risk of sounding harsh, I would start over. The concept is lazy and the typography is poor. The kerning in particular is all wrong.

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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 7:14 p.m. – Permalink
  • jevad

    K E R N I N G

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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 7:17 p.m. – Permalink
  • MHDC

    That y descender is pretty bad. Not very constructive, but I'm also in a mood.

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    Dog-earNov 13, 08, 7:20 p.m. – Permalink

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