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Last post: 3 years, 2 months ago | Thread started: Nov 13, 08, 5:19 p.m.

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• roberthuston

  Hello. I would love some feedback and opinions on these two logo refinements. The colors are not set, so those are open to change, but I questioning the layout of the type next to the logo.

  The logo is set. The type face is as well.
  Thank you for your feedback! :)

  <a href="http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3186/3028006313_344deb6e25_o.jpg"></a>

  Nov 13, 08, 5:19 p.m. – Permalink

• roberthuston

  

  my bad

  • Yes, you are bad.
    *joking*– pylon

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:20 p.m. – Permalink

• MrOneHundred

  I think the top blue thread should be a bit tighter-in. What is the target audience? ’Coz that typeface makes me think of McCall’s sewing patterns.

  • business people for organic business clothing– roberthuston1/3

    Yes, target?– pylon2/3

    d'oh, was posted at the same time.
    
    – pylon3/3

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:22 p.m. – Permalink

• non

  I'm sorry Robert, but this is absolutely brutal.

  • It looks like it was done in 15 seconds.– non1/4

    wow. why do u post such negative shit. use ur time more wisely.– roberthuston2/4

    He wasn't wasting time. Maybe this is how he feels. Don't see the actual insult.– VectorMasked3/4

    You asked for an opinion. You got it. I am not going to sugar coat it.– non4/4

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:22 p.m. – Permalink

• brains

  I kind of have to agree with non, you might want to restart.

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:23 p.m. – Permalink

• MrOneHundred

  So when you say “The logo is set. The type face is as well.” do you mean you can only tweak what is already in place?

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:29 p.m. – Permalink

• pylon

  The colour scheme, font, and *thread* treatment don't read as organic.

  I'm not saying the below logo is awesome or anything, but here's something for reference.
  

  

  • Oh crap, 100 is here. That means that I'm here too late and should go home...– pylon1/4

    k. thanks.– roberthuston2/4

    hahahah. I’ve been here for hours. It must be getting really late there.– MrOneHundred3/4

    8:30pm only, but man it feels later! I just got back from the airport and am checking mail etc.– pylon4/4

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:29 p.m. – Permalink

• roberthuston

  yup. I was trying to get opinion on which type orientation was better.

  • Ah.
    Disregard previous comment. Unless you're looking to start over.– pylon

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:30 p.m. – Permalink

• MrOneHundred

  You could try and do something with the threads, like incorporate the E and T initials into the weave, and maybe get some dimensionality happening.

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:31 p.m. – Permalink

• pylon

  ^^^ Agreed.
  Maybe by making the threads the same line-weight as your font? The 't' could easily be incorporated into one of the threads if you wanted.

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:33 p.m. – Permalink

• Corvo2

  can't quite understand why you ask for opinion with so much limitations.

  • But even so, 2nd option looks better to me.– Corvo2

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:37 p.m. – Permalink

• 3point14159

  the typeface and color palette do not seem to be hitting the mark

  • +1– pylon

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:37 p.m. – Permalink

• ukit

  Reminds me of something you'd see at TJ Max or other stores I try to avoid but sometimes get dragged to by various women.

  • i totally thought the same. hanes for women or something– showpony

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:40 p.m. – Permalink

• tasty

  this feels like it's for maxi pads or something.
  and i'm usually nice on logo critiques.

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:43 p.m. – Permalink

• VectorMasked

  Characters are too close together. You are having problems mostly with the e, a and s due their roundness.

  The threads are what mostly need work. You could almost create a work of art if you could make them slightly more lively and realistic without making them the exact same width from one edge to the other.

  • +1
    The illusion of an elliptical cross-section could add dynamism.– pylon1/3

    Yes, I was in client-meetings all day... Still shifting gears :)– pylon2/3

    blah– jimzyk3/3

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:44 p.m. – Permalink

• MrOneHundred

  Sorry, roberthurston, I don’t think anyone is trying to be critical here, I think there is a lot of potential if you can get the “stakeholders” to give you a chance to unlock it. I trust you have the skillZ.

  • I'm being critical.
    But hopefully constructively.
    This has the potentialz.– pylon

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:45 p.m. – Permalink

• roberthuston

  Alright, alot to go on. Thanks everyone for ur input.

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:48 p.m. – Permalink

• VectorMasked

  ...May the skillZ be with you...

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 5:51 p.m. – Permalink

• dbloc

  different font, and that looks more like basket weaving than a thread. Thread is super thin.

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 7:07 p.m. – Permalink

• gramme

  Agree with brains and non, this is simply not good. At the risk of sounding harsh, I would start over. The concept is lazy and the typography is poor. The kerning in particular is all wrong.

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 7:14 p.m. – Permalink

• jevad

  K E R N I N G

  

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  Dog-earNov 13, 08, 7:17 p.m. – Permalink