Logo, Looking for Feedback
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- janne760
no modern curvy smooth initials anymore, please!
WHAT HAPPENED TO IDEAS??
- jiaf0
@ dyspl :
I've thought about using that one but it's pretty tattoo-ish, which really isn't my style (as you mentioned above). I've got a lot of respect for that kind of work but I just wanted to see if i could do it.
- I quite liked this one. nicely done IMO. but then if you feel it doesn't represent what you do... :)dyspl
- d_rek0
why not the bottom terminal of the J looping through and creating the top bowel of the B? as opposed to the bottom of the J connecting to the bottom of the B.
oh and also
BJBJBJBJBJBJBJBJBJBJ
- ukit0
I agree with moamoa's approach on this. This is a logo that will have to mesh with the rest of your work, better to make it fairly low key.
- Vicentvangogh0
- that's a good idea, food for thought! I like how it flows into the M.jiaf
- Nairn0
I actually quite like the two-toned text you've got up there - it's different without being offensive, minimal without being dull - it's got a bit of character and it stands out.
For sure, it probably doesn't whet the appetite of a knowing designer - but is the internet clown car of competing egos really what you're targetting?
That said it needs a bit more work and love put in to it - some of the details are quite ugly - but when I see the As and that Y, I'm actually slightly wet.
Well, not quite - but I do quite like it.
Take on board what people here have to say - but balance that off with what you feel inside - it's your logo, after all.
- BannedKappa0
how about a cute little bow
- sorry wrong topic...See Tatoo foot ideas...BannedKappa
- hahaismith
- UPS had one, it worked. lol.akrokdesign
- set0
Looks like tits or balls or something, I think maybe a weight somewhere between the two might work best.
- airey0
if you're starting either a stereo retail outlet or infomercial sales in the 70's i'd have to go with the left one.
have you tried a logo with 'james barry' rather that just JB? it looks / sounds kinda cheap as just JB to me.
my 2 cents. please ignore if found.
- ukit0
Second one looks like tits and ass. I like it.
- doesnotexist0
I see already you could make a play off the apple's command symbol on their keyboards. keep it thin.
- matt310
the J kinda looks a like a d to me when i first saw it.
- Mal0
- metal_leg_will0
I like the form and negative space in the first one. But, because I read the previous comments, it does look like thick, hairless balls.
- or titsmetal_leg_will
- which should be hairlessmetal_leg_will
- agentfour0
at first glance the J looks like an 'a' on the first one.