Logo, Looking for Feedback
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- jiaf
I'm creating a new logo for myself (James Barry) and I'm trying to decide between these 2. I'd love to hear your thoughts and any suggestions. Thanks!
- set0
Looks like tits or balls or something, I think maybe a weight somewhere between the two might work best.
- airey0
if you're starting either a stereo retail outlet or infomercial sales in the 70's i'd have to go with the left one.
have you tried a logo with 'james barry' rather that just JB? it looks / sounds kinda cheap as just JB to me.
my 2 cents. please ignore if found.
- ukit0
Second one looks like tits and ass. I like it.
- doesnotexist0
I see already you could make a play off the apple's command symbol on their keyboards. keep it thin.
- matt310
the J kinda looks a like a d to me when i first saw it.
- Mal0
- metal_leg_will0
I like the form and negative space in the first one. But, because I read the previous comments, it does look like thick, hairless balls.
- or titsmetal_leg_will
- which should be hairlessmetal_leg_will
- agentfour0
at first glance the J looks like an 'a' on the first one.
- designbot0
The hole in the first b looks like a skateboard. I think somewhere in-between both logos on thickness would look best like set said.
- Complexfruit0
The more I look at it, it begins to read as "db" for me instead of "Jb". #2 more so than #1 though.
- moamoa0
now its a butterfly
- tenpointtwo0
I agree with the comments of the "J" looking like a "d"
I've been through this a lot, my initials are JB as well. I think if you're going to go minimalist with it, make sure you know what makes a J a J. I think if the tail didn't start to come back towards the body and instead pointed upwards, it would be a lot more successful. It's a small change, but check it out:
- meffid0
I see a cock and balls and a pair of tits.
- dbloc0
I agree with airey.
have you tried a logo with 'james barry' rather that just JB?
- neverblink0
The B looks top-heavy in either.. have you tried flipping it horizontally? (I know that willdistort your reflective-ness between the letterforms)
- janne760
no modern curvy smooth initials anymore, please!
WHAT HAPPENED TO IDEAS??
