Logo crit
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- roberthuston0
this is hard to give feedback, all those are variations on just one idea. what about other type & forms relationships?
- squidy0
The deco type face is killing it.
- Soler0
They all look the same, don't dig the font. Doesn't look like it would reduce well.
- jaylarson0
I also would like to see a different typeface used. Maybe sometime of grotesk?
- _salisae_0
you're lacking style integration and have just stacked one design on top of another and neither are that well developed or compelling to look at. a fun idea though! i think you just need to get your hands a little dirtier .. so to speak.
- i take back my 'neither are developed' comment on the inverted version of #2_salisae_
- Knuckleberry0
Ok I know I am not directing this but....
Why not combine all the Skyscrapers into one object (pathfinder tool) and add a single knockout for a window in the tallest pillar. By combing them it would make the objects and type a little more cohesive. Just saying.
- monospaced0
jesus
- d_rek0
I have preference to #2 in regards to the windows. As far as being functional at that state I could see it falling apart at smaller sizes - you may want to do a few separate versions of the logo to be used in different context.
In regards to the base mark (the b&w top version) you have some type issues (see monospaced remark) and also there is some white space being trapped in between the type and the bars.
- monospaced0
It's painful to see the increased stroke weight on the A and S of Audiopolis because you went and enlarged them for no apparent reason. Correct this please.
And give the client another option!
- monospaced0
Where's your other idea?
- Doorman0
I like the fact that it refers to Metropolis (same font as well), but i wouldnt show the windows at night thingy....too many irrelevant details
- btw I like the top one - the originalDoorman
- But what is the reference? Has nothing to do with the movie or the era!Vicentvangogh
- Vicentvangogh0
What is up with the 1920's Art Deco typeface, and the equalizer reminds me of Atari's 2600 Tetris game.
- killthefish0
I like the "skyscraper at night" look of the thing. 2nd one in row 5, especially.
I don't like the font.
(full disclosure: i don't necessarily know what I'm talking about.)
- seven8nine100
Maybe play with a circular shape, experiment a bit with it to add some dynamics to reflect the 'mobile studio'. You could drop the retro font for something that would give the logo a modern edge. As for the skyscraper night effect, I think, although it is for your friend, that it should remain a suggestion/direction. Obviously it doesn't work visually, drop it if it is going to interfere with the message you want to convey. Sometimes clients come up with cheesy/corny ideas, let's be honest, don't be afraid to decline, otherwise they'll thinkg you are gay or something (alright people, just a joke ; )
- toe_knee0
It's a bit old fashion