Logo Crit
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- itstimefortea0
#2 with type from #3. nice bit of archer. agree with the above comment about adding 'the'. gives it more authority.
- detritus0
#2 with cross-hatched waves, not that antique clip art you've strangely chosen to employ.
I'm going to go against the grain and suggest that I quite like the direction #5 is going in. I think it needs quite a bit of work still, but I dig the retro west-coast feel [I assume] it's going for. I guess this one's heavily dependent on ultimate deployment - it's a bit hard to appreciate in this stark context.
I'd like to see a version of #1 that has slightly hexagonal background blocks for the text (like old motel/petrol signage?).
#3 simply doesn't work for me.
#4 is yawn-inducing and generic.
- fernandolins0
#1 or #4
- utopian20
#1 unique, simple and to the point...
Overall really nice logos Ian:)
- matt310
i like #5 minus the reflection
- nicole_marie0
I do like #1, I think you guys want it to look like a vagina... so now it kinda does.
- DCDesigns0
#4 Clean and simple. Maybe a different font, I like the suggestion of making the rectangle the shape of TX.
- ian000
Thanks for all the comments everyone - much appreciated.
- neverblink0
#1
But do they sell Robusta or Arabica coffee? The bean you are currently using is a Robusta bean (straight line/fold), which is generally a lower quality of coffee. The Arabica has an S-shaped line/fold down the center of the bean. Although the difference between the two doesn't neccesarily have to be really clear. In logo's it is common practice to use the straight line for Robusta and the S-shaped one for Arabica.
- marychain0
2
it's the only one that tells the "coast" story...if that's important...which I assume it is.
it's also very nice
- neue75_bold0
1 and 4 are quite nice...
- jaylarson0
4. subtlety is yr best friend.
- roundabout0
1 & 4 are really good.
- ukit0
#1. You put the vagina on top for a reason.
- reallybigtruck0
#4
- non0
2
- Llyod0
guess I'm not the only one who thinks #1 looks like a swollen snatch
- Llyod0
#2 or 3