Crit the Pasciifolio v2 2828 Responses

Last post: 3 months, 3 weeks ago | Thread started: Jul 24, 08, 10:46 a.m.

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• pascii

  i've added some changes and redesigned it.
  specially on the colors. they might be a bit too dark on
  windows.

  Now it takes 3 Clicks to go to the Detail, and it's a more simple.

  I will Code the Site in Plone, so i try to keep things really slick.

  Home and Links:
  

  

  Overview:
  

  

  Detail:
  

  

  Jul 24, 08, 10:46 a.m. – Permalink

• pascii

  Made up a new thread to keep it easier to follow

  

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  Dog-earJul 24, 08, 10:47 a.m. – Permalink

• dearhead

  way better.

  

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  Dog-earJul 24, 08, 10:50 a.m. – Permalink

• rodzilla

  I feel like the colors and layout fit your work a bit better. It does exactly what you need it to do, look forward to seeing it functional.

  

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  Dog-earJul 24, 08, 10:58 a.m. – Permalink

• gramme

  I can't stand the typeface used for pascii, but that's just me. Also, I doubt your logotype should be that big, it's a bit horsey at that size. Otherwise, looks much better.

  • is it chalet?– tank021/2

    yes, i kinda made this up some years ago, and since then, i used it as my logo
    
    – pascii2/2

  

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  Dog-earJul 24, 08, 12:44 p.m. – Permalink

• pascii

  >bump

  

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  Dog-earJul 25, 08, 1:15 a.m. – Permalink

• PSYKHO

  Much much better pascii, have you tried it in a dark gray?

  

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  Dog-earJul 25, 08, 1:24 a.m. – Permalink

• Fariska

  Way better, clearer and immediate.

  the left hand nav need more hierarchy (a thing that the right-hand side box has) and i'd play a bit with the highlighted status (what about extending the highlight box to the left margin?)

  Other than that i'd try a dark warm grey as a bg.

  But now is a proper folio.

  • i'll work on that navi. it still doesn't do it for me either..
    
    – pascii

  

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  Dog-earJul 25, 08, 1:31 a.m. – Permalink

• 23kon

  will the rulers around the top and down the left be animated?

  :)

  • only if adobe keeps freehand alive!
    
    – pascii

  

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  Dog-earJul 25, 08, 1:51 a.m. – Permalink

• Amen

  yes it's better and feel right. but i still dont like a little guy in the corner. it doesn't fit...

  • Yep I think so to... Just looks odd and out of place.– PSYKHO1/3

    you design nazis!– Fariska2/3

    haha. i'will keep him 'cause he travels with me since 99
    
    – pascii3/3

  

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  Dog-earJul 25, 08, 1:53 a.m. – Permalink

• rafalski

  I like chalet used for logo

  

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  Dog-earJul 25, 08, 1:57 a.m. – Permalink

• pascii

  i will fiddle around with the navigation and look for that warm gray. thanks for the crit so far!

  

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  Dog-earJul 25, 08, 2:24 a.m. – Permalink

• drgs

  You spent two weeks on changing colors to brown?

  • been too busy with other stuff
    
    – pascii1/4

    you reckon?– mimeartist2/4

    @ drgs– mimeartist3/4

    drgs has a problem with brown. people that is.– skt4/4

  

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  Dog-earJul 25, 08, 3:23 a.m. – Permalink

• skt

  "Other than that i'd try a dark warm grey as a bg."

  I would agree. Then use greys and whites for your type, reduce the size of your logo by half, have it in white, and tighten up your menus.

  

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  Dog-earJul 25, 08, 3:42 a.m. – Permalink

• pascii

  Golden:
  

  

  Here with the warm Gray.
  

  

  Web 2.0ish
  

  

  • Warm grey WINS– Fariska

  

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  Dog-earJul 25, 08, 4:40 a.m. – Permalink

• chossy

  When you post a note next to one of the pages it looks like the wee guy in the top right is saying it.

  

  • see– chossy

  

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  Dog-earJul 25, 08, 4:54 a.m. – Permalink

• chossy

  

  
  that didn't work well you need to not type anythign the begin with

  • see– chossy1/2

    :D– pascii2/2

  

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  Dog-earJul 25, 08, 4:56 a.m. – Permalink

• chossy

  My honest answer is I like the GOLDEN colors that you posted and I don't mind brown atall, as for the pascii text I would have it as one o the hues of brown and lower the opacity quite allot, same with the wee alien froggy guy in the top right, I also don't like the new underscores you have, I much prefer the old way, with a box round the button, have this as a lower opacity box as well, or don't do any of these things and simply have a wee cigarette a beer and look out the window and realise that humans were only really meant to sit on a tree stump and watch maize grow.

  • haha– kelpie

  

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  Dog-earJul 25, 08, 5:03 a.m. – Permalink

• itstimefortea

  lose the guy in the top corner. i like the golden one too. try your logo in a darker tone rather than lighter. i think it'll look pretty slick then.

  

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  Dog-earJul 25, 08, 5:12 a.m. – Permalink

• kelpie

  I quite like the golden too, though I think the warm grey brings the colours in the work out more (a client would say they seemed more "zingy")

  I like this now, but I do think you should look at the detailing of the menu, its a bit sparse at the moment. It either needs to be set with a finer consideration (line height etc) or given extra elements graphically imo.

  gettin there! :)

  

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  Dog-earJul 25, 08, 5:20 a.m. – Permalink

• canuck

  i like this one a lot more

  

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  Dog-earJul 25, 08, 5:24 a.m. – Permalink