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- Mojo0
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- TaylorB0
@ boobs:
I'm a dick for what? don't quite follow you...@salisae:
it is a burberry inspired invite...
you can find the images I saw here: (I recommend the book)
http://www.youworkforthem.com/pr…
or just look at this clipping from book
- _salisae_0
starbucks promo was his inspiration!
- boobs0
TaylorB dick for downloading images!
- jimzyk0
im just sorry i didnt get to see the bloody invite, back to google...
- neue75_bold0
I like it/you...
- forget most of these comments, there are about 4 talented people in this thread, that might be able to do better...neue75_bold
- I like you...Jaline
- mike is 2 of themDr_Rand
- hahaha, I was kidding by the way, I think it's shit...neue75_bold
- no you weren'tskt
- no, not about the 4 talented people bit...neue75_bold
- hahahaha "mike is 2 of them"kelpie
- creative-0
Um... I don't dig the format, but some of the photos are really nice. I'd make them b&w (not sepia) and keep it really simple with some really nice typography.
Also apologies that none of the above noticed you designed them for your own wedding.
- vrmbr0
oh my god..
did you people know what i just found out?
- gramme0
Bears re-repeating...
"Just don't overdesign everything - humble is sweet."
- BaskerviIle0
BTE!
- emukid0
i just realized that the invitation is to taylorB's own wedding. i am slow like that.
- madirish0
really, really ambitious...... and i can say- will be interpreted by many as being pretentious. sorry.
aside from the *ridiculous* cost to print/trim this, i too must agree with the comments above that cannot stand 'lovers' acting 'lovingly' in photos of just themselves for an event surrounding/all about them. really drives me insane.
i think your creative and execution is well done, but even if i knew these people and wanted to attend, i would throw this away instantly for no other reason than i hate that aesthetic and CD.
- vrmbr0
is this really the couple on those pics or placeholders for now? they look a bit like catalogue models. if so, it is great but i'd like to see pics with the real life people in it pls. k thx.
- kelpie0
I think its quite appropriate now given the rest of this thread
- vespa0
oh the shame!
- capsize0
A black border used to be reserved for death announcements. Has that convention changed?
- kelpie0
mm hmm, sorry taylor, may you breed plentifully.