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- utopian0
- ...or you could rotate the h to get the y, which opens it up a bit, and use the leaf as the counter for the a.MrOneHundred
- +1utopian
- CheDouglas0
- I think you need to bring the leaf element back in. See above note. (or tell me to f*** off!)MrOneHundred
- no i agree 100% – I still had it in mind.. having a crack at your idea now.
CheDouglas
- CheDouglas0
gaps? hmm..
- CheDouglas0
- I voted the "y" with the desender.52kilo
- the top one is looking much better. maybe try reducing the size of the counter?_salisae_
- will try that too – I think the pink is a bit too rich or the green not quite dark enough, they're not balancing well. so i'll work on that and the convince the client to go 2 colour :)CheDouglas
- CheDouglas0
again, appreciate all the feedback.. now trying to decide what to show the client. I know they will ask for a the 4 colour version.. as a mark i'm leaning towards the second one down with the white counter in the "a"... the pink leaf to me now is a bit distracting. . but then again I have definitely been looking at this one way too long. maybe i should sleep on it. votes?
- I am leaning towards No. 1. But sleep on it.MrOneHundred
- I agree with you, 2nd one down_salisae_
- try to take this secon logo from preavius image and put leaf to corner of letter alo4u
- doctor0
I like the last one better. I know that doesn't give you any help about the leaf - I too think it should have a place somewhere - but I don't think the upper versions work as well as the last.
I think the 'a' could use a little "footing" on the line. The very rounded bottom of it could use some balance, if you ask me, but that's just my opinion.
Nice work though - much more legible now.
- You might be able to use the leaf in the bottom of the 'a'?doctor
- CheDouglas0
Nearly sold on the refined version.. I've settled on a slightly different "y" with the "m" like top. I have tweaked the "a" slightly giving it a flat base (not sure about this though). At this stage we're ditching the "pink leaf" it is a sad day, but after some deliberation with the client we've come to think that it is not needed as part of the identity.
- I have also squared off the type below the mark. and think the grey has a stronger company feelCheDouglas
- Schnub0
may suggest that you free the top type mark from the line"assist your health' the two pieces hang a little awkwardly together... or is this a specific request of the client. other than that like the type mark..
- MrOneHundred0
OK, nearly there! Just add the bevels, gradients and drop-shadows, and you’re golden!
- CheDouglas0
oh, i'll also add a lens flare!
- Seriously though, it’s looking good. Option 2, IMHO.MrOneHundred
- Thanks mate!CheDouglas