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- ian00
Site for a Kung Fu school. Your thoughts are appreciated.
Home Page:
About Page:
Schedule Page:
- dirtydesign0
I dig it. And I want to take classes...
- you totally should. I've done one kinda of martial art or another for most of my life and this is BY FAR the best school and style.
ian00
- you totally should. I've done one kinda of martial art or another for most of my life and this is BY FAR the best school and style.
- NewElpaso0
the text looks like its just plonked on there..
sub headings?get rid of the two colour paint bands... :(
why are you aligning it to the left?
logo a bit too big?- two color paint bands are there to stay... cause they are HAWT! good point about the text.ian00
- Nah, the paint bands are lame, the inner black band is way too wide. And detritus is right, the cropped image looks like a mistake next to the rough edges. Looks good otherwise.Transit_Broadcast
- detritus0
Could use a little more white on the right hand side - that transition to black then red smears is a little full on.
Probably just me, but I find the straight clean edge of the main photo in the About section jars with the ruffled textured edge of your page end.
Otherwise - seem to do the trick.
- 7point340
haha the line in the header looks awful familiar as it gets cropped behind the logo especially... smacks of something :)
- TheBlueOne0
a) more margin on left side. Site is right-side heavy for no good purpose
b) Unless a good reason for the red stripe on the right, I'd get rid of it. I get the black "brush stroke" line on the left. Very "asian" looking. Maybe find a way to make it less "heavy".
c) Don't like the gray splotchy background in header. Site would look nicer without it.
d) Like the clean look of it otherwise. Any more stock pics? You should use them.
- Jaline0
Get some pretend fighting girls in there and add oil. Site will generate a lot of hits.
No need to pay me.
- kelpie0
^meaning you'll do the shoot for free?
very Christian of you
- kld0
Take a look at what I'm wearing, people. You think anybody wants a roundhouse kick to the face while I'm wearing these bad boys? Forget about it.
- I suppose those strap-ons could poke you in the eyecreative-
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- seed0
It seems cleanly organized but I find the red and black on the side distracting. The design also doesn't really convey any hints of being related to kungfu or the culture but maybe that isn't necessary.
- interesting point about the design related to culture. We are trying to modernize the dated look of most MA sitesian00
- seed0
I think it is good overall, good pictures, They guy with the staff in the side column looks great.
- kerus0
lol@sweeptheleg
GET HIM A BODY BAG, YEAHHHHH
- roundabout0
I would use the same colour red as you used for the paint stripe on the right for the red type, also play around with the layout of the Chinese text. Apart from that I like it. Do you do Ninja Classes.
- skt0
why are people critting a 3 month old thread?
- Glitterati_Duane0
Why are they wearing Karate Gis and belts at a kung fu school?
