Logo Help
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- voiceof
I'm working on a wordmark for a federal services agency that is moving into software development.
They want modern, solid and approachable.
Any thoughts on how it can be improved, is it working at all etc...
- menos0
so what Y did you go for?
- ldww0
- voiceof0
Bump for good measure
- blaw0
I think that's really well done. One of the nicest logotypes posted here recently.
- dbloc0
I like it
- kev_charlton0
i agree, clean and simple.
- ukit0
Well, it's just the name typed out in Neo Sans, but I guess that's all you need sometimes, right...?
- voiceof0
well, its neo sans squashed down to 88% with the y and L altered. But I was hoping it was far enough from neo sans to seem unique; looks like I will need to try something more to distinguish it.
- ukit0
I think it should be about the end effect rather than how much effort it takes to make.
- well saidComplexfruit
- I agree.voiceof
- i try to tell my clients this every single day.. sometimes i work out before delivering the logo, makes me look sweaty9832892398
- PonyBoy0
if it's just a type treatment and you're going for 'modern'...
... you're done... now move on, damnit. :)
- armed_rob0
I like it cause it so clean. only thing I would try was to make the "y" more simple in form - to make i fit the other letters better.
I dont know... I think its worth a try.
- blastofv0
nicely done – I'd say check the balance between the 'y' and the other characters though. In particular, the 'c' is narrow and weak in comparison to the widths of rest of the letterforms. It should be equal in width to the 'o' and the 'e' characters (which are typically the same width in this sort of typeface), especially considering it's the lead-letter. Right now it seems like the letterforms get wider as you track left to right. The 'c' is definitely more narrow than the 'o' right next to it, and that irks me.
Minor details of course...but I figure if you're in there tinkering with your vectors/bezier curves etc., you might as well push it all the way and make it great. Especially when you're dealing exclusively with letterforms for a brand identity.
- Thanks for the crit. I see what you're saying with the 'c'; not sure what to do with the 'Y'voiceof