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  • blastofv0

    nicely done – I'd say check the balance between the 'y' and the other characters though. In particular, the 'c' is narrow and weak in comparison to the widths of rest of the letterforms. It should be equal in width to the 'o' and the 'e' characters (which are typically the same width in this sort of typeface), especially considering it's the lead-letter. Right now it seems like the letterforms get wider as you track left to right. The 'c' is definitely more narrow than the 'o' right next to it, and that irks me.

    Minor details of course...but I figure if you're in there tinkering with your vectors/bezier curves etc., you might as well push it all the way and make it great. Especially when you're dealing exclusively with letterforms for a brand identity.

    • Thanks for the crit. I see what you're saying with the 'c'; not sure what to do with the 'Y'voiceof

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