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- gramme0
what's it for?
- detritus0
is it finished?
- Jaline0
Interesting.
- monNom0
The figure has some anatomy isues that spoil the rest of it. eg:
Tiny fist, head is aparently on a really long neck, misshapen brow. Composition could use some work... everything's leanining a bit. Cool background though, i dig that ink bleed stuff.
- chossy0
Fucking brilliant look at the shear power the old guy has I love it, however his shoulders are too small beef them up yo! if you don't beef his 'shooders' up I don't care it's still wonderful :)
- moogoo0
looks like jesus as a ninja
- edd-e0
if its an illy file i would rather see your talents with line art over blended shaded art... im not into it...
- ian000
whoa... thanks for the feedback. wasn't excepting it on a Friday night.
I should first say that it's not my illustration (I wish). It's my wife's. It's for our Kung Fu school (we're students). we are doing a bit of rebranding in exchange for ass-kickings. We are trying to develop a style to cary over into other illustrations to be used on a new site and some print materials.
It's an illustration of TaMo. The founder of Kung Fu.
monNom, thanks for the constructive criticism. Very helpful.
- ian000
- Much better! The other one looks like some kind of Tai-Chi Jesus photoshop, imo.detritus
- Agree, this is better, the one at top is fookin weird, it scares me in the same way clowns do!uncle_helv
- mydo0
I think it's great.
I'd maybe lighten the bottom of his white robe, when i first looked at it i thought you had got a bit trigger happy with the airbrush.
- lvl_130
it looks very interesting. i like it. i think the hand could be shrunk a bit and the head could be brought more to scale with the lips/scowl.
oh wait, it's the lips/scowl that need to be brought down into place.
nice job.
- drgs0
i you do his clothes etc in the same technique, i love it
- ian000
thanks for the feedback everyone. we'll keep plugging away.
- Corvo0
the lighting is somewhat strange, if it's coming from top left.
- thismanslife0
The head looks super odd in the scene