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- spookDD
New portfolio site my work.
Feedback is much appreciated! Don't hold back. Cheers!
- Jaline0
not bad.
1. There could be better continuation with the background (cardboard), such as in the top right-hand corner when your content starts.
2. In your Works section, the titles could be better formatted and the dashes could be fixed as well.
3. You could also add rough edges around the white background (where you content is) to keep it continuous.
- spookDD0
I'm not a "webnik?" Thanks for the feedback! I'll look into posting more writing about the work, Im trying to be more concise and not ramble. Not getting enough about the explorations only?
- spookDD0
I'll take a look at that, previewed in Safari, Firefox, IE, didn't get that text issue, is your text set larger than default? If not, to the batcave! I like the rough edges idea too, will have to work more on that. Cheers so far, thanks for the input.
- Jaline0
My text is pretty small on FF b/c I like smaller text. Anyway, I'll check about the resizing.
- Jaline0
okay, I tried resizing and it still looks the same.
Remove the break after "Chocolates" and put one before "New packaging" (right after the dashes finish).
- spookDD0
will do. just a few technical things to work out before more updates. thanks for the help so far everyone!
- chossy0
don't do what jaline says she is a witch and your actions will be unwhittingly putting a hex upon you.
Given that it's a sex hex but it's a hex none the less.
- Jaline0
it's true
- spookDD0
weird. jaline is a webnik witch? more like a fairy godmother? any thoughts on the site?
- spookDD0
anybody else?
- sair0
hey spookdd
interesting work. if you want my humble opinion, your site would look a heck of a lot better on just a white background without the cardboard. not sure that it gels very well put with your illustration? think it would look a lot cleaner/tighter without it. if you do keep the cardboard though i would look at the image quality, looks kinda blurry on my screen.
also, i would push the title to the top right, maybe the left but not centralised - a centralised title in a side column just looks a bit wrong to my eye
hope i helped!
- skt0
menu isn't obvious straight away. and i think the cardboard might be a little strong for a background. Like your bambi poster though.
- canuck0
Yeah, not a huge fan of the cardboard bg. otherwise work is nice.
- spookDD0
excellent feedback guy. all will be considered in revisions / rounds II. stay tuned!
- spookDD0
anyone else? working on some more revisions later tonight. Cheers!
- spookDD0
REVISIONS --------------------------
took all of the feedback into consideration and did some revisions. feels cleaned up and still maintains my personality without all the cluster fuck that used to be.Let me know! Cheers!
- Jaline0
Good job on fixing most of the problem areas :)
- spookDD0
Thanks! Anyone else have some more input? Cheers!