Bag Site design - critique pls
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limited edition design bag: http://www.mmpeople.com.sg/embra…
japanese urban design bags:
http://www.mmpeople.com.sg/hungr…would u buy?
- rafalski0
I like them quite a lot, but navigation could be improved on both
first one: I don't see a way to return to main menu
second site: there's only 'back to main', no 'one step back'.. oh, wait, there's 'catalog' link - but that's not clear, I thought it was a link to pdf or something.. maybe putting it in the left corner would be clearer?
- stewart0
http://www.mmpeople.com.sg/embra…
i like the logo.
the site looks a bit big & bold (what about smaller screens than my 20" cinema display?
also navigating with small images in stead of product numbers would be nice.
photography: there's no reference to the human body.http://www.mmpeople.com.sg/hungr…
i like that one.
though it still looks a little like a draft when you look at details.
- Bluejam0
1st site
for me, the typography and copy writing is letting the site down. the products look good but the details of the site, the basic design elements need a polish. plus i would lose the black strip overlaying the image...2nd site
nice idea, better than the first but again let down with bad typography and not sure about the use of black, looks awful (to be honest) and there's a lack of elegance which this site could do with.
- maribee0
I think it looks nice. The navigation of the first website is a bit awkward to see at first but otherwise it's very nice. If I were to be a shopper wanting to order bags, I would want to see pictures of the different colours available. It's good that you display the colours choices but to be able to click and see what it looks like would be awesome.
- e-pill0
the bags are the same constructions in the collection with different faces and different pocket treatments on the same bag...
i saw 3 collections of the same bag...
- dead0
Thanks so much... needs more polishing
- dead0
realised the typogarphy problem may be cause by the missing font... its fixed now.
any better?