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- st33d
Just rebooted, but the interface is quite experimental. Source code freely available (scroll down on the welcome page).
http://www.robotacid.com/flash_i…
I'm looking for harsh criticism so I can fix any bugs or improve stuff.
Thanks, and long live PVN.
- madirish0
......ummmm...
- Bottlerocket0
From a programming perspective you seem to do a lot of interesting things.
However from a presentation level the site leaves a lot to be desired.
- Bluejam0
i agree with bottlerocket.
- Concrete0
Is it 1995?
- Bottlerocket0
Hardly anyone ever agrees with me.
I probably should be a bit more helpfull by talking about some specifics. Here goes:
The layout & typography really muddles the communication. Its generally pretty poor. Which from reading your work, this isn't what you concentrate on anyway, so its no biggie.
Josh Davis (http://www.praystation.com) and Yugop(http://www.yugop.com/) are similar technoligists and I would have a look at what they do as their work is always presented in such a top notch way it shames most of us 'professional' deisgners.
- Arran0
I think you should get rid of the blue squares and the side bars which are in a different colour... try not to use a bground thats going to distract from actually looking at your work.
Move the menu to the top of the page.
And think about switching from times new roman (if thats what typeface it is) because lets face facts, it aint pretty.
I think like bottlerocket got started with, do some research of top companies/companies that you like and their websites..see what they are doing to use their site as a means of showcasing their work, and take note.Good luck
- designerror0
it looks terrible. follow bottlerockets tips and redo the site from scratch.
- wendog0
site functions ok, but the visual aesthetic is wrong wrong wrong...The whole thing looks like it was designed in paint and word...Just sit down and sketch some layouts that are interesting, or look at some of the other suggested sites to get ideas...At that point, you should be dying to let all that creative energy out!
~Andrew
- wendog0
QUOTE:
'The Interface is Quite Experimental"-----------------
Not at all dude...seems a little underdesigned to me...check out some work by Hi Res:
http://www.hi-res.net/
- Bottlerocket0
Those are some disturbingly flat mamaries on the Hi-res site.
- st33d0
Lose bubbles,
lose layout,
lose font.k.
Rebuilding...