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- bjm0
First link he posted Crouwel it's on the far right.
- Crouwel0
i see people talking about a b/w one but i haven't seen it?
- doesnotexist0
i will keep that in mind, bjm.
i will keep everyone posted of the next version.
thank you everyone for the feedback, much appreciated!
now listen to this!
http://www.paulhanger.net/misc/e…
- bjm0
The ones that use negative space for the bottom smaller square work better imo.
lose corners.
Maybe add grid lines/elements over the top, a combo of each you may say.
- harlanerskine0
I would considder aligning the bottom text box's left side with the left edge of the box above. my mind wants the to align more. otherwise I think you have a good poster on your hands.
- backwards0
both are very nice, well done.
- Mojo0
Honestly - I really think if you remove the corner things you will have a very strong piece! The colours are all quite good .. the b&w should only be used if they can't afford colour copies..
good stuff seriously! please lose the corners, it will look orgasmic.
- doesnotexist0
i agree with you guys, i dig the first one a lot more. trying to come up with more ideas though for people. in the end i will probably push for the first design.
thanks for all the input!
- piperboytoy0
there is also something classic about the first one. it has potential to be brilliant! scrap the new one and work on the old one.
- Rand0
I liked the new one until I saw the old one, which I like even more
- uhohseangettio0
i like it
- piperboytoy0
the first one have more depth, and is more interesting. It has good potential.
- doesnotexist0
i concur with you, rise, on the logo.
- rise0
I don't really like the corner thing, and I think your logo is too directing in the overall design, i would move it off some, away from the information.
- piperboytoy0
2 days ago someone showed a poster for the same thing, but a bit different. they basically ahd the same colors. but i liked the other one better.
it would be cleaner if those corners matched.
- rise0
the b&w one is orgasmic
- doesnotexist0
thanks for the responses, everyone. at first i was concerned with the corner overlaps, they are growing on me. you have to put out of your mind that theyre just overlaps, but rather they are parts of six-sided stars.
i do like the other grided poster i did a lot better, but im kind of butting heads with the dean here at school as to what the school's image should be. he is not going for the grid, as i discussed in the 'corporate fucks' thread.
anyways, here are some more colors on v3.
- -ryan_harrell-0
i dig the 3 color, use the red in the #2 for the main and blue for the bottom cause the red does pop
- not_report0
i like the second one.