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- BonSeff0
#2 blue looks great.
wish i could read it
bold and clean
- kingcatcole0
I like the 3rd one. That red just grabs my attention.
- gadg3tg1rl0
I agree but are the corner overlaps intentional?
- gadg3tg1rl0
agree with Bon, that is
- doesnotexist0
yes, corner overlaps intentional
- sajets_v20
#3 and #5 to me... but i liked the 1st ones better. The black one was really nice.
- elms0
i like 4 and 5
- bjm0
like it a lot, besides the corner overlap.
- clerk0
the corner overlap looks wierd. and the placement of the bottom square is unbalanced. if it's for a college of architecture i really think you should use a grid.
- Mojo0
Please kill the overlap, ruins it.
Other than that
very good.
Good job mate.
- Jaline0
I like the black and white one.
The 2nd and 4th ones would be in second place.
- not_report0
i like the second one.
- -ryan_harrell-0
i dig the 3 color, use the red in the #2 for the main and blue for the bottom cause the red does pop
- doesnotexist0
thanks for the responses, everyone. at first i was concerned with the corner overlaps, they are growing on me. you have to put out of your mind that theyre just overlaps, but rather they are parts of six-sided stars.
i do like the other grided poster i did a lot better, but im kind of butting heads with the dean here at school as to what the school's image should be. he is not going for the grid, as i discussed in the 'corporate fucks' thread.
anyways, here are some more colors on v3.
- rise0
the b&w one is orgasmic
- piperboytoy0
2 days ago someone showed a poster for the same thing, but a bit different. they basically ahd the same colors. but i liked the other one better.
it would be cleaner if those corners matched.
- rise0
I don't really like the corner thing, and I think your logo is too directing in the overall design, i would move it off some, away from the information.
- doesnotexist0
i concur with you, rise, on the logo.