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- pr20
no no no don't do what tara is saying...
instead: take the $ forom the job and buy a new purse and tiffany necklace beacuse that's what women do and they like it and then you can look pretty and... god i love women for just that.
- blackspade0
i remember seeing your original concepts, its turned out great considering the circumstances
- jpolk0
that gentleman seems like a fucking idiot...
- topside0
are you looking for feedback?
overall i'd say the texture work looks pretty amateur. the main money texture looks like you just multiplied some crumpled paper on a tan canvas. the drip stain looks thrown on -- it doesn't blend well at all.
the falling money in "the tour" section looks bizarrely out of place. the rain is falling in fast forward, but the money is falling in slow motion? also the movement on the money is pretty hokey.
i don't get the old-style scratchy film effect in some of the sections either.
the swinging light in "the man" page looks very nice, but the clouds and the window in the upper left look way out of place.
i like the panning idea in "the register" section, but it wasn't executed properly. the image slightly shifts as it pans down, and there's a paper texture to the right that all the sudden disappears when it pans down. the lens flare looks very poorly done too.
the money in the extras page looks like it's being shot out of a paper feeder and some of the elements in the foreground are very washed out. you did a great job on the lighting in the previous section why not do the same here?
you could probably link the large lloyd banks text back to the homepage as well. overall i'd say some of the html layouts could be spiced up a little more as well.
the characters look like they were blended pretty well into the scenes, but some aspects of the scenes themselves look out of place (like the giant courvoisier bottle the size of his head) and the ghostbusters style clouds.
sorry so long!
- g3kK0_K1D0
negative!
- muckychris0
Gotta agree with topside 100% - short deadline or long deadline. Not a fan of this kinda photoshop work. And adding filmgrain and lil filmy threads? There's gotta be a reason to do that other than - I saw it somewhere else or I grabbed it at flashkit.
Probably rubs me the wronag way when someone posts "I did a bunch of slick layouts" Not a fan.
- meok0
I think it looks good. Good job.