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are you looking for feedback?
overall i'd say the texture work looks pretty amateur. the main money texture looks like you just multiplied some crumpled paper on a tan canvas. the drip stain looks thrown on -- it doesn't blend well at all.
the falling money in "the tour" section looks bizarrely out of place. the rain is falling in fast forward, but the money is falling in slow motion? also the movement on the money is pretty hokey.
i don't get the old-style scratchy film effect in some of the sections either.
the swinging light in "the man" page looks very nice, but the clouds and the window in the upper left look way out of place.
i like the panning idea in "the register" section, but it wasn't executed properly. the image slightly shifts as it pans down, and there's a paper texture to the right that all the sudden disappears when it pans down. the lens flare looks very poorly done too.
the money in the extras page looks like it's being shot out of a paper feeder and some of the elements in the foreground are very washed out. you did a great job on the lighting in the previous section why not do the same here?
you could probably link the large lloyd banks text back to the homepage as well. overall i'd say some of the html layouts could be spiced up a little more as well.
the characters look like they were blended pretty well into the scenes, but some aspects of the scenes themselves look out of place (like the giant courvoisier bottle the size of his head) and the ghostbusters style clouds.
sorry so long!