mock up check
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- dconstrukt
hey...workin on a mock up for client... they're trying to tell me what to do...grrrr.
i just want to give them something nice that will knock their socks off so i can get more work and a happy client.
its not done....workin on the top part with the graphics... and waiting for their logo...
its for a telecom consulting company....
you like?
comments? opinions? suggestions?
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- fate0
mneh
- stewart0
hmmm.
don't like the image
but the overall look & feel seems ok.
can say more if you show more.
- dconstrukt0
what about the image dont you like?
i'm trying to get a feel for what you're sayin.....
- brundlefly0
hmm 45 degree backing watermark lines.....
where have I seen those before....
hmmmm.....
- jevad0
not really much there to comment on mate - what about some content layout?
- dconstrukt0
huh?
- dconstrukt0
jevad...i'm workin on that now....
just wanted to hear some feedback on the graphical part of the layout.....
- jevad0
yeah it's nice...hard to put into perspective without some form around it!
:)
- taragee0
well the tagline says simplify your biz solutions over a crazy pic... & its hard to read...
maybe an approach more like
http://www.saab.com/
or
http://www.acura.com/models/modeā¦cleaner...
- BXCAR0
well theres not much to see.
Everything we see is pretty... safe.
In my opinion the green has got to go. Too poisonous. Then you will see there must be an eyecatching detail (which the green now does)
Look & feel of the buttons look splendid, sans doute
- whiteSneaks0
not knocking my socks off. definitely need to see what happens when we get into some content. nothing happening on the homepage.
why so small?
- dconstrukt0
they dont have much content....so i didnt want to make the site sooo big.
plus they dont have much as far as images go....so I'm limited there....the narrower the site the easier it is for me to design based on the images i'm able to work with....
if not lime....then what color would you think?
i wish i could design it bigger but i'm kinda forced to based on budget and the images i can work with....
ideas?
- stewart0
if there is not that much content - make something that doesn't look like another american website design.
you're agency isn't called "TemplateDesign", is it?
- taragee0
i know this is gonna sound crazy but maybe blue :P
lol if youre limted with photos why not do soemthing more interesting with the tpography... do they have a logo?
- stewart0
this is nice
- jevad0
that is a damn nice site - flux are on it!
- taragee0
i guess maybe were saying lay off the ground effects ;)
- dconstrukt0
stewart, i'm not sure I "get" what you're saying.
another american design? template design?
HUH?
I'm sure that the client wont let the other type of design fly...he wants something corporate and simple.....
- taragee0
yeah i like flux's site too...
- taragee0
dconstruct the one hes giving are simple in layout - attention given to solid color and type before a photo even touched it