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- duckofrubber0
talk them into losing the baked goods illustration. it is not strong enough to stand on its own or to be a support to any type treatment. i'm sure they don't want to, but you have to convince them that it is the weakest link. if they must have baked goods then hire an illustrator to revamp!
other than that, the style of the type is fine, albeit it needs some tweaks. the mod girl may be too much though, but that depends on the brief i suppose.