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- Dancer0
The idea should work fine but it needs a few tweeks.
I think you have pushed it too far in general. It almost looks forced, the type is very cramped. Loose the glass and bottle, it adds nothing.
Bring it back a few steps and first a start by looking at the type. The font is fine just the positioning.
Am I rambling....?
Keep going but go back a bit :/
good start