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    I like the overall concept and where you're going with it. Good stuff, keep it rolling. That said...

    I think you can make better use of the "3". It kinda gets lost in the mix. Maybe a size/type/or color change will do it well. Good point by sauerbraten about needing to hold water in black.

    Also, I'd either emphasize the balls (a sequence?), maybe as a watermark, or do away with them.

    Cheers.

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