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- detritus0
Tone's a bit personal, probably a translation thing, but don't start off with sentences such as "Designed the online identity for...", get your subjects in there.
- I had this written by a native english speakerfues
- Not a very good one, then.detritus
- hahafues
- :)detritus
- LOL. Yeh, perhaps rewrite it. For the Alloux section, I find myself reading it with a Jony Ives voice for some reason.fyoucher1
- I don't really see a problem with the copy. Do you mean too 'personal' as in familiar or, first person? It may be a bit stiff but the copy is fineGnash
- (what I read of it, anyway)Gnash