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- fues
Some shameless selfpromotion for my new website at http://www.nicolasdesle.be
Feedback is greatly appreciated!
- fyoucher10
Looks good.
- No scrollbars appeared for me in your About section (I'm using Safari on 27" iMac). If I didn't have a magic trackpad, I wouldn't have been able to see most of it.
- Your content shifts overtime I click a portfolio item. Because the scrollbars aren't needed in Main section but then appear in work view -- which shifts everything over for a quick seconds.
- Would be nice is Next/Previous buttons used fixed positioning rather than being at the very bottom of each page. That's a long way to scroll before seeing them.
- Might be a lil too much white space on some sections.
- Main font gets kinda funky over here. It's not terrible but does anti-aliase kinda oddly.
- GeorgesII0
my crits are simple, rework the first icon set, most icons have rounded edges, meanwhile the wifi and waves are straight,
strokes weight also seems to differI do not see a big difference between Alloux and likva, Nubo app looks ok, I guess but it took me a long time to decipher what each design meant,
sorry hope I didn't come out too hash
- fues0
Thanks guys!
- detritus0
Tone's a bit personal, probably a translation thing, but don't start off with sentences such as "Designed the online identity for...", get your subjects in there.
- I had this written by a native english speakerfues
- Not a very good one, then.detritus
- hahafues
- :)detritus
- LOL. Yeh, perhaps rewrite it. For the Alloux section, I find myself reading it with a Jony Ives voice for some reason.fyoucher1
- I don't really see a problem with the copy. Do you mean too 'personal' as in familiar or, first person? It may be a bit stiff but the copy is fineGnash
- (what I read of it, anyway)Gnash
- doesnotexist-1
use pictures not words
- utopian0
nice work.