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    @xcm

    I was referring to work a bit more on the spacing of information or blocks of text. It can look a little more polished with more experimentation.
    For example the footer... it seems that there are 5 blocks of text. Client header, client list, up, thanks and copyright into. And this blocks seem that could be condesed a little while keeping the separation needed. For example the "client header"... it can be closer to the actual client list. After all it belongs to the same block of information. Right now you have the "go up" button closer to the client list than the client list header.

    You could also maybe a ad a very very light 1 pixel horizontal line to separate the "mercy and coypright info" blocks from the client list. This mercy part is the bottom most part and it is not as important as the client list or projects.

    You could also reduce slightly the space from the mercy part to the bottom edge of the browsers window.

    Tweaks like this could help the work stand out more as it currently has the same amount of impact as the text and could help defining what is where.

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